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By : lilvior
  • From NekoRai on December 26, 2005
    WOW I'd never really thought Depression could do that to a person.
    If any thing I think Clay should rescue Jack. He has a very different out look on good and evil.
    So he would realise that Jack wasn't evil just a lonley child looking for a friend and give him that one little thnig.
    Then later their friendship could evolve into something deeper like love.
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  • From ANON - kai on December 21, 2005
    me wants chase to save him
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  • From ANON - chase's girl on December 20, 2005
    Have chase save him. Please!!!!!! I love Jack don't let him die.
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  • From ANON - siren on December 20, 2005
    woohoo have chase save him
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  • From ANON - AketchiDragon on December 20, 2005
    *sniff* About time somebody did a good story with Jack. And by the way.................would you be such a kind author and write about CHASE saving the poor kid, but of course this is a democracy.

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  • From ANON - Hybrid on December 19, 2005
    Me: Oh, so depressing. I like it so far. Chase! SAVE HIM!!
    Chase: Why should I?
    Me: 'CAUSE I SAID SO!!
    Chase: You're in no control of this story, so... (sticks tounge out) Nyah.
    Me: MAKE CHASE SAVE JACK!! Or Rai. Or let him die. I don't really mind.
    Chase: LET HIM DIE!!
    Me: Shut up!
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  • From ANON - me on December 19, 2005
    Totallt Think Rai should save him some how
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  • From ANON - labruja on December 18, 2005
    HO¡¡¡¡ IS SO GOOD... PLEASE, CHASE CAN SAVE HIM, PLEASE, PLEASE... EXCUSE MY ENGLISH, IS NOT MY LENGUAJE

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  • From ANON - Sophia Young on December 18, 2005
    Please save him! Jack deserves to live! Have Chase do the saving ,that would be cute! Or if not Chase than Clay ,he's good too. Just not Raimundo. Chase or Clay. Preferrably Chase.
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  • From ANON - kat on December 18, 2005
    please save him let chase save him please :(
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  • From ANON - gundam06serenity (too lazy to log in) on December 18, 2005
    Noooooooo! Chase must save him, he must!
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  • From ANON - lydia on December 18, 2005
    Poor Jack. You are right...he never gets a break in the show. As for who to save him...my vote would be for Rai! Chase might be a cutie...but he is an arrogant basterd and only really had eyes for Omi. Clay is nice...but I can't really see him with Jack. Can't wait for the next part! Great work!
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  • From ANON - bloodyrose on December 18, 2005
    CHASE! make it CHASE!!!!!!!!!! major OOC!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 18, 2005
    this is really good, poor poor jack. i'd like him to be saved by raimundo.
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  • From ANON - Halabalooza on December 17, 2005
    I always felt sorry for Jack. It would be interesting if... Somehow... Through some mysterious turn of events that I will leave to the author (bwahaha) the Xiaolin monks turn up, and have to take him to the temple. I mean, his whole response to the fact that someone had saved him would be good material. And hey, throw in some slash, woo.


    ... Or he could die, y'know, it's your story.
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