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Reviews for A sleep over

By : Toamon
  • From Aysha on June 18, 2012
    That was really good more would be better. =^_^=
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  • From RichardH on December 29, 2008
    ...*sigh* well, it was hot... but it could have been a little longer and more detailed... maybe a bit slower too
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  • From ANON - joe on June 24, 2006
    great
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  • From inuyashademon345 on January 22, 2006
    hmm good needs another chapter but you need some penitration here
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  • From on December 17, 2005
    THIS IS A GOOD STORY!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - JoxBox on December 16, 2005
    This was very good but I recomend adding the first chapter to the second chapter to make it one long chapter. This is because first of all somebody who wants to know if this is a good story is going to scan through the first chapter if the chapter is boring they won't read. Also try to spell your chapter titles correctly.

    This is just a suggestion,
    The story rochked anyway !!!
    JoxBox
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