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Reviews for The Shower

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  • From ANON - Cini on September 21, 2006
    Seriously, learn proper grammar, learn to spell, use a spell checker, get a beta, and work on the whole 'lack of a plot' thing.
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  • From ANON - la la on August 15, 2006
    >_< it's ok....
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  • From ANON - snakeeyes on December 10, 2005
    this story is good
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  • From ANON - JoxBox on December 08, 2005
    This was good but you need to work on grammar and spelling issues.
    Also i suggest when writing stories like yours please try to remember to use smut terms and by the way its sperm not goo because when you read goo it sounds like shit.

    But it was really very good.

    anyway,
    JoxBox
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  • From FTiger on December 07, 2005
    Not bad. But its hard to read sometime. Anyway, nice yaoi and KEEP UP WITH THE GREAT WORK!!!!

    -CYA!!!
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