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Reviews for Cold Shoulder

By : AloofandAndrogynous
  • From ANON - random fapper on April 30, 2016
    I just want to say that this is a good story, but there are two major flaws that I have seen. One is that Katara's dad would never force her to marry, (This one cant really be fixed as it would mess with the story) and two throwing Katara's original neclace out a window into a canal would piss her off something bad. That is the only memento she has of her mother. Past that it is a good story.
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  • From ANON - Tahn on August 22, 2014
    Is that the end, or are you planning to make more? It's a favorite of mine.
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  • From Lostatsea4tolong on December 13, 2012
    I love this story and I wish you would do more with it.
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  • From ANON - danyell on September 02, 2008
    Oh I just have to say that I really thought this was your best story. I was not too sure how well this story would be because of the age differnce but you did it very well. I am curretnly writing a story with Mai and Zuko about an arranged marraige so reading this has given me some thought on how Mai and Zuko would react.

    I hope that if you continue to write that you do something with Mai and Zuko. I don't know if you do request but if you do please do a Mai and Zuko.

    Again very nicely written!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From Wilder on April 07, 2008
    i could have sworn i reviewed this already, but it looks like i didn't! well i love it! they are so absolutely perfect together and the way the intereacted together in your fic added other dimensions to their relationship. when i saw that episode in book one i knew someone had to do a fic of them together, thank you for being that person! and doing it so well! it is exactly how i imagine them, and their personalities were spot on!
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  • From ANON - Gin on September 13, 2007
    i notice the subtle changes... tight. :)
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  • From ANON - Bret on August 29, 2007
    good job, keep it up
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  • From ANON - Reece on August 24, 2007
    At first, i was a bit concerned, with Pakku's age. But it's realistic. I just sat and read all 7 chapters. nice.
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  • From ANON - M on October 23, 2006
    Yay!
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  • From ANON - Jimi's Little Wing on September 25, 2006
    in all seriousness, KataraxTeo might be interesting, but KataraxJeongJeong WOULD be 'hawt'. i wasn't sure if i'd like this, but it turns out i REALLY do. way to go.
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  • From ANON - Marie on June 25, 2006
    I am amazed and impressed. THis is well (and realistically) written.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 11, 2006
    im glad you finished this story, i like it a lot
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  • From ANON - Kuu-sama on February 07, 2006
    I don't think Pakku was OC. Snarky people have their tender moments after all. :)

    Thank you for another wonderful chapter.
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  • From ANON - Scarylady on February 03, 2006
    Yeah...you know what would be REALLY disturbing? Paku having /children/. Can you imagine having HIM for a dad? (or having to have his babies? >twitch
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  • From ANON - Scarylady on February 03, 2006
    When I first saw the pairing for this I must admit I was very disturbed...>_< The thought is still convulsion-inducing...but it's such a good piece of writing that I read it anyway. Just a thought: Katara's necklace (the one Paku originally made for Kana) was valuable to her because it belonged to her mother, not her grand mother (In Episode 6 she did say somthing along the lines that it was all she had left of her mother). While Katara wuold certainly appreiciate the new necklace I don't think she'd be too crazy about seeing her mothers necklace tossed into the drink...
    Excelent writing though...very well written. I have to admit, though I would never see this pairing actually happening, you make it very plausable and believable...^-^
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