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Reviews for Remaining in Exile

By : penpaninu
  • From Tahn on May 23, 2007
    That was well written :D The only help I can offer is that his name is spelled Zhao. Not a big deal though. I just wish you had continued on with this instead of resaying what we knew. It was great to hear it from his pov though, great writing :D
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  • From ANON - Ari on January 25, 2006
    Simply Beautiful.
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  • From ANON - Cat on January 02, 2006
    Veru nice. Very nice indeed.
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  • From ANON - doesn't matter on December 25, 2005
    It's okay, but it's basically what we saw in t.v, u just describing it, it's not fun to read what you already saw in T.V., you know that's copyright, if you added your own scenes it would have been wayy more fun to read.
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  • From ANON - airforce501st on December 23, 2005
    its good you might want to try and make a sequal "A good factual one" on what happens next in his life
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  • From ANON - thechickenlittle on December 10, 2005
    very interesting peice.

    very well done. i love it!
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  • From ANON - oxcab on December 08, 2005
    i like it ^_^
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  • From ANON - ManChesterEngland on December 07, 2005
    Wow! That was really good. I like how you told the whole finale in Zuko's POV. I like how you decided where he stands now. it was really good..... but as a correction (in case you plan on writing any more that might have the admiral in it) it's Zhao... not Jiao :D
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