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Reviews for Bring Me To Life

By : lilvior
  • From ANON - Kachie on November 05, 2006
    Not to be a bitch or anything, but this is getting a little old.

    I dislike fanfics that have random romance, you didn't explain why Raimundo feels for Jack, and you didn't explain why Jack feels for Chase. You're also rushing this relationship by making Raimundo very out of character and romantic with Jack. Jack, while grateful, would most likely reject Raimundo's feelings anyways because of fear and Raimundo, knowing his stubborn, masculine personality wouldn't admit his feelings to Jack so openly and be that physical with him at first. I dunno, it just seems a bit rushed and unexplained.

    Please develop a bit of a plot as to the history behind Raimundo and Jack to make this pairing work, because so far there's nothing supproting it.


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  • From ANON - corinne on September 26, 2006
    Hi, I dont have an account here, im more like, someone who comes to just read fanfiction. And, i must tell you, your story is great, one of the best Jack/Rai stories ive e v e r read. im not sure how old this story is or how long youve left it alone, but i think you should definetly continue!!

    sincerly,
    corinne AKA pinkealing
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  • From ANON - MB on July 29, 2006
    I hope you continue on with this story, its got great detail and a nice storyline. I love how its turned out.
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  • From ANON - Dustin on July 28, 2006
    I must read more of this A.S.A.P. This is a great story. I can't wait for it to continue. After all, it's hard to find any gay Xiaolin Showdown stuff.
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  • From ANON - senachan141 on July 27, 2006
    XD I loves it...make sure you update soon so I can get me some RaixJack smut, m'kay?
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  • From ANON - Lady Chaos on July 01, 2006
    LOVE IT, Please continue this fic and update soon, and I love the bit at the end of the 5th chapter, it's sort of like a teaser of whats to come even if the actul (sp?) lemon is coming for a while, anyway please as stated before update soon
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  • From ANON - Takayu on June 21, 2006
    Wow, this is the first RaixJack fic I've ever read.
    And, dear god, I must say I've found a new pairing to look for...XD
    Also, I liked the story a lot, so keep on writing! :)
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  • From NekoRai on December 26, 2005
    Oh Damn that was one good fic I'd never thought of Rai and Jack likke that before.
    I really hope that you update soon i'd like to know what happens with Rai and Jack.
    I hope Clay and Kimmiko get something going on as well.
    Then you could find someone for Omi he's a real cutie.
    But I think Chase needs his ass kicked nobody deserves to die like that not even "Evil Boy Genious Jack Spicer"

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  • From ANON - Mak on December 11, 2005
    I love this story... it makes me moist in my special places... lol sorry couldn't resist.
    Great story keep it up! ^-^
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  • From Shan on December 11, 2005
    Oooh, Rai and Chase fighting over Jack... that would be nice. Glad you wrote more! Now write even more!
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  • From ANON - BC1 on December 11, 2005
    I love it! Please update soon.
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  • From Shan on November 28, 2005
    Kimiko is a bitch, Omi is cute, I like this story a lot. Yay.
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  • From MakTheOutsider on November 27, 2005
    Hello this is Mak again... I feel So bad for not writing a better review... so I waited untillt he next chapter and Im glad I did...
    I LOVE IT!
    It is amazing! Hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - BC1 on November 26, 2005
    I love it! It's grate! Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Sarkywoman on November 24, 2005
    Oh, this is so good. I love it when Rai loves Jack and Jack loves Chase and Chase is a git. My fave line in this so far: 'He wanted to hug all the ‘evil’ out of him, make him forget all about Chase Young'. I loved that line so much, not sure why. Something about smooshing the evil out of someone amused me.
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