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Reviews for Mirror of the Heart

By : BlueBlaze25

From ANON - Elle-dono on December 08, 2005
Eh, you wanted 59 reviews...So it's time for the EGO BOOST! (dun dun dunnnn!)

-Fenton Easy-Bake Oven (equals) Pure brilliance

-Writing technique (equals) Awesome

-Everything (equals) Rockin' my sockin's

And now you have 59 reviews
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From ANON - miko hanyou on December 08, 2005
I love your story!Truely one of the stories with Danny P./Danny F. pairing i have been waiting for,Please Continue!
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From ANON - Ri on December 08, 2005
Awww no smut. Its cool i can wait *sits and eats cookies* For some odd reason i was imagingin Danny waking up to see his half naked in bed. XD I have such a pervy mind. Anyways hey is Danny in his boxers? Well duh i mean if halfa can see him and describe the way he did i am guessing yes. I loved how he described Danny, so sexy. Anyways cannot wait to read more. I want to see how Sam and Tucker are going to react. ^^ Great chapter weeee bye!
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From ANON - Click on December 07, 2005
"His breathing raced into pants"
I just really like that line. It made me laugh.
Now! Write more!
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From ANON - sinsoftime on December 07, 2005
Fainaly! another chapter! its about time, lol. ive been checking almost every night! Dan? ok, that works. I drool much more than he does when i watch DAnny Phantom, lol. Did u see the Christmas special??! It was soooooo cute!
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From ANON - Anon on December 07, 2005
loved your story! update soon! there aren't enough fenton/phantom fics out there. i've only read a few of them.
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From ANON - Elle-dono on December 07, 2005
So, you want more than 59 reviews? I think you can get waaaay more than that. Too late for the warning about that Pookey crap; I read it when I first entered the affnet DP fandom.

N.E.W - Q.U.O.T.E (for when the birds and the bees go about it like bunnies and you're stuck wondering where the fuck your muse went):

-'O what Fate hath befallen thee; when thoust hath lost thy faith, and thy armpits grow trees!'
-'I hath no fear; for the divine essence of Destiny shall kick Fate's tiny round arse!'
-'Thoust wish to bet aponst they wager?'
-'Eh, sure. Why the fuck not?'

And now, to honor the worst fic ever written-
POOOOOOOOOOOOOOKEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEYYYYYYYYYYYY SUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCKKKKKKKKSSSSSSSSS ASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!
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From ANON - Ri on December 01, 2005
More!! Loved the preview ^^
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From ANON - Click on November 29, 2005
Yay! I was kinda dissapointed by the rape-thing going on at first, so I definately liked the turn. I mean, Danny just doesn't seem like that type...

And for the random phrase, something a friend said to me the other day when I stole her purse for ransom because she stole my book. "I don't care if you have all my worldy possesions: I have your book!"

Email me when you update, then.

And update soon danngit!

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From ANON - Click on November 29, 2005
Yay! I was kinda dissapointed by the rape-thing going on at first, so I definately liked the turn. I mean, Danny just doesn't seem like that type...

And for the random phrase, something a friend said to me the other day when I stole her purse for ransom because she stole my book. "I don't care if you have all my worldy possesions: I have your book!"

Email me when you update, then.

And update soon danngit!

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From ANON - Arain Rowan on November 29, 2005
Nice. Please write more. Not exactly the hard-core chained-to-bed scene some of us were expecting, but a nice warm fuzzy end. which actually when you think about it, is pretty damn hard to write when someone's tied up in comparison to a hard-core evil scene that kinda easily coems when someone's pinned to the bed.
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From ANON - Harnia on November 29, 2005
Oh, Goddess... I love you so much. *glomps*

The is the most smuttiest thing in Danny vs Dan P. in all of Danny Phantom history. *drool*
Dang it, you made me all wanting for more!
... Which means it's time to recruit more zombie fangirls into the world of Danny Phantom yaoi.
I'll really recommend your fiction to them!!
THE SMUT! THE pr0n!! *__*

Quotes? I've got a scene for you... Sorry if it turns into utter cheesy crack. XD
#1
Dan P: Danny... what in the Ghost Zone is THAT?!
Danny: ... It's my costume for the school play.
Dan P: Danny... do you mind signing my boxers?
Danny: Why?
Dan P: I see the potential of a porn star in you, love.

Keep loving! More scenes/quotes will be sent through email. :3
... Because you have said so... *holds out a paddle* More smut or more paddles for you over my knee!
Rawr!

... Love(how ironic),
Harnia- *hugs you, you silly smutty fiction-author*
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From ANON - Hittocerebattosai on November 13, 2005
^^ Poor danny... that must have startled him! ^^ are you going to write more soon please?? pretty please??

hey... on the backwards ticking clock thing... --, I've had the exact same thing happen to me... The only thing is that the clock said I shouldn't have even been in school at the moment and it was going back quick enough that it was quite visible to everybody... ^^ is was very amusing... it was freaking everybody out... ^^

I cannot wait to read more of this! so... please try to update soon? please?
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From ANON - Elle-dono on November 12, 2005
Ok, I am BEGGING you to update. I've been searching all day for a good DPxDF ficcy ;_; .:sniffles:. Please? Your story's so uberly fantastical and I want to hug it and watch it grow into a nice yaoi ficlet...

...But why are you asking for a Beta? Your fic rocks enough without one, I don't think it's able to get any better x.x
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From ANON - AmethystRei on November 12, 2005
Oh wow, >< I really wanna know what's gonna happen next.
Please....please....PLEASE!!!!!!!! >
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