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By : roxnn2005
  • From DCoyote on March 27, 2017

    This is an incredible work; the emotions just blew my mind. Very well written. The best part was the concept that the "evil" in Dan Phantom, could be reformed through true love.


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  • From ANON - Ron on August 20, 2013
    First I'm so happy for Sam and Danny are finely together and so are Don and Erin and she pregnant I'm so happy for them
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  • From ANON - Ron on August 20, 2013
    I'm so happy for them all I can't wait to read the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Ron on August 20, 2013
    Oh my gosh he made it and got some sense in to Dan with some truth' s put in his head I hope he will be ok I love it all and can't wait to so what happens next
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  • From ANON - Ron on August 20, 2013
    Omg I was so worried for her thank goodness Don got there in time and they finally realized the truth and Danny went to fix but he made sure to tell Sam he loves her thats so sweet I hope he makes it in time and that Danny and Dan will be ok I can't wait to see what happens next to them and what happens next to them all
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  • From ANON - Ron on August 20, 2013
    Oh man this is bad they are about to make a big mistake I mean Dan is close to being good and if they do take him away what will she do and they are putting her in the worst persons hands to
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  • From ANON - ron on August 20, 2013
    Oh snap busted I hope everything will be ok and Really Danny it's just another older version of you haven a god time you act like you busted Vlad with Jazz I can't wait to see what happens between them all next and what happens to them all next
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  • From ANON - Ron on August 20, 2013
    Say that again I loved it and it was so sweet and so sad for the other her it took meeting her twice for her to love her I guess that that other one just don't meet hem in the right time I can't wait to see what happens between them next and what happens to them all next
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  • From ANON - Ron on August 20, 2013
    I loved it all and the shower was not just hot and sexy but butaful and sweat I can't wait to see what happens between them next and what happens next
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  • From ANON - Ron on August 20, 2013
    Awe yahh things are getting started and even without truly knowing it there stating to really get close it was sweet I hope that they just keep getting closer and closer to each other and it awesome that he saved her and that they can't and Really without knowing don't want to ether I can't wait to see what happens between them next and what happens next to them all
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  • From ANON - Ron on August 20, 2013
    I like it so fur but your forgetting Dani" Phantom other than that it's awesome and I can't wait to see what happens next to them all
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  • From ANON - The flash on December 18, 2005
    Please create a squel to this master piece.
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  • From ANON - The Flash on December 18, 2005
    update it soon
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  • From ANON - Unvoicedsigner on November 12, 2005
    that was beautiful i loved it personally i think you should continue it as long as you can

    happy writing


    ....Unvoicedsigner....
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  • From ANON - A Karswyll on November 10, 2005
    A Riddrick fan? How interesting. And yes, you do have to love those eyes.

    Now onto the reason for this review—the story. I generally enjoyed it but felt that Erin as an original character and Dan’s radical personality change could have used a little more work, as well as occasional paragraphs that could have been worded better.

    Dan’s easy acceptance without any deeper psychological realizations about various things is one point. Human begins are creatures of habit, physical, emotional and morally, don’t change easily. For Dan, he’s been pure Evil for the past ten years, has no emotions or what we would call a conscious even if he is from an emotional human, and has been trapped for the past little while most likely plotting his revenge.

    Erin… she’s an original character and you often have to be careful when creating and using those in a story, otherwise it just seems like an author’s self-insertion. I think she was a little to accepting of Dan and feel into the roll you created her for to far easily. She herself needed to undergo more emotional development and realisation. Because if she has the inner innate goodness of moral character that I perceived her to have from what you’ve written, the turmoil within her conscious would have been tremendous.

    But I’ve criticised enough and would like to leave you with some words of encouragement. Don’t let people like me stop you from being willing to share your work with others.

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