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By : Florville

From artemiswings on June 16, 2006
Wow, I absolutely LOVE this fic! I just spent the last hour reading the chapters I didn't get to last night, and then I went and read "Seeing Red", which is another masterpiece! I can't wait for your next update! Keep up the fantastic work!
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From ANON - Blutig Tod Engel on June 12, 2006
I read from one to here in one night, after work. o_O
I MUST PRESS ONWARD.

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From ANON - BLutig Tod Engel on June 12, 2006
THAT IS A VERY CORRECT MORAL.

Quoth the tired girl :
"...the moral of the chapter is: Pissing off a manic depressive person is often a very, VERY bad idea."
I know it for a fact. :E
Excellent work.
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From ANON - BLutig Tod Engel on June 12, 2006
Ooo, I like it......... of course I've liked all of your other stories too. D: BAD BAD me. (Staying up 'till four when I have work at seven is not good..... oh well. Awesome stories.)
XD
So......... oh yes, and thank you SO MUCH for being literate in your stories. I hate reading something so full of mistakes that I feel like I'm proofreading for a ten year old.
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From ANON - NA-JediKittyKaiba (too tired to log in) on February 11, 2006
wow...just, wow. This is a wonderful piece of work and I look forward to the next chapter!
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From ANON - Evol on February 01, 2006
omg! dibs a slut! thats so fucking sexy!
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From ANON - wouldnt-u-like-2-no on February 01, 2006
oh...no..you..did..NOT!

i agree. it really has been just to long. and with all the other irkens around they're gonna have to set up new rules for the bedroom. that'll be some fun. hehe...wait, did they ever even have any rules? however suttle or unspoken.
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From ANON - Kuragari Okami on January 29, 2006
((O.O))....*breaks into fits of insane giggles* That....was....AWESOME!!!hahahahahaaaa!!*is ashamed of how much of a pervert I have become* oh welll....I understand the "not updateing so soon" thing I'm busy here as well and couldn't check up on the fic until now....LUrv!!!update when you can as long as you update it's cool...>^.^
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From ANON - Wicked Noise on January 26, 2006
I PREWROTE THIS WHOLE THING TWO DAYS AGO. THEN I WAS EATEN. ARR.
I had to start writing this TWICE! Why didn't I copy and paste?! WHYYY!?! This is going to be a long one, since there is quite a lot to say about a fic that's nearly eighty chapters long. If it gets cut off I'll have to split it up. Well, here goes...
I've spent a lot of precious, drooling hours reading this story. Not in one shot, though: I take my slow time on good stuff. This fic just has so much... STUFF in it! The plot, the sex, the violence, the angst, the sex... and, oh yeah... THAT... About the humor specifically, I loved the dead parrot (I have a 'Beautiful Plumage!' t-shirt), and the world leaders were great. Pope Man! V.P. Man! The Prime Minister Men! Brilliant! And now I laugh whenever I hear the word �monitor.� (Aww, but I liked Lard Nar in the show� Oh well, torturer Dib was definitely amusing enough to make up for that. [MORE BLOOD!!]) Oh, the wonderful laughs. And I agree with Gir being a cute little perv, but I would imagine that he really doesn't grasp the concept of that stuff all too well. Speaking of which, the smut... I don't know what to say. I'd just be repeating everyone else. It's inspiring, to say the least. I want to write some hardcore ZADR now. This stuff (and that in The Daunting) is nauseatingly beautiful. Moo.
As for the RAPR here, RAPR doesn�t interest me the same way that ZADR does. I mean, I like Red and Purple, I think they�d make a funny couple� but the RAPR smut just didn�t do it for me as much. (Hey, what happened to those guys, anyway?) It must be the passionate, intense LOATHING; the odd, hate-filled interdependence of the characters in ZADR that makes it so interesting. (Whenever I try to explain that to my friends, they look at me funny and page the school nurse, who hates me now. Jeez, lighten up, people.)
I�m unsure if someone mentioned this earlier, but this �Evil� Dib does resemble Johnny both in his actions and appearance. (In your cute picture of Dib I noticed the �Smile, You Fucker!� shirt, which is one from JTHM that I particularly liked. And I thought that it was ironic that he tried to commit suicide [for the SECOND time � give him a break, man� or don�t] with a Nailbunny shirt, since Nailbunny was the �voice of reason� and tried to steer Nny AWAY from suicide. WHEE!) But the resemblance really hit me when he shaved his head except for the two locks in front. VERY Johnny-esque. I approve.
I�ve started listening to PWEI, and I like it. Will check out other bands soon too, if I remember. (Actually, there is a funny story about �Final Countdown��) And I�m not sure if you�ve heard this, but I found this WEIRD version of �Ich Bin Ein Auslander� that was mixed with some Halloween song. Not sure if a fan made it, but it sounds pretty damn cool to me.
I have fanart, but RARR, I need to get a DevArt collection� I mean, account� AAGH!! I keep confusing it with the Bad Art Collection! WHEN will my scannerless pain END?? (Actually, I�ve been keeping my mind �clean,� I suppose, of outside influences. Your Dib pic is the only other ZIM fanart I�ve seen lately. So if any other people have drawn the same thing as I� THEY�RE STEALING! It�s all THEM!)
[I have this saved on Word. I�ll probably look back on it in a few years and kick myself. Ah, my fanfiction days. These bloody eccentricities of mine� ZADR� I use parenthesis a lot.]
So, as you can plainly see, We the People want More. Supply and Demand, Filbert. Oh crap, now I�m quoting �Rocko.� �WN

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From ANON - Herme23 on January 25, 2006
Ohmigod! While not usually into BDSM myself, that was so hot! LOL Who are the people asking for warnings? Sometimes these warning things are so crazy! I mean, look around, you're bound to read crazy stuff here and there. But oh well, I like it, and Zim's so evil, gods I love him. Woohoo! Keep it up girl! Yours Herme
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From ANON - littleshipper on January 25, 2006
Okay, HUGE shame on me for not checking this earlier then now >_< Bad Brie! Bad!

*cough* Anyway, don't feel bad at all!!! This was sooo worth the wait! *fans self* Ever since the last chapter I've been wondering what his punishment was going to be. I was expected something sort of like this, but I didn't think it was going to be this intense. I loved this chapter. It amazes me that even now, after over 70 chapters, you still have that spark that made me fall in love with your writing. You can still make your readers feel suspence and keep them hanging on your every word. That's amazing.
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From ANON - Wicked Noise on January 24, 2006
I'm gonna have to make this quick and review again tomorrow, but... mechanical rape was MY IDEA!! MY idea, dammit!! Several MONTHS ago!!! EVERY time I come up with an idea, someone gets to it before I do! FFFUUUUCK! (slams a spike into frontal lobe) Ohhh... I'd better get my fic typed or some more ass will be paddled, brutally... It's your fault for distracting me from it for so long anyway.
But, actually, the way I wrote it was very different than this, so it's not so bad. And, either way, THIS CHAPTER was excellent. I imagined a ping pong paddle... GIR was great. Dib's reactions were... FASCINATING. I forgive you. (But I'm warning you people, stop reading my fuckin' mind and pilfering my brainchildren. Jeez.)
I did some art for this fic too, but alas, there be no scanner. Why? WHY!? I dunno. My dad says I can use the camcorder... but still... grrr.
I'd better go before I get eaten alive by parental unit. W.N.

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From ANON - chatnia on January 24, 2006
YAY! I was wondering when you were going to update again! I'm happy now. And I was shocked when you mentioned the book-licking scene, cause that's one of my favorite parts of the story! lol...
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From ANON - Ish + Stu on January 24, 2006
Ish: tag-team is right! *cackles*
Stu: ..Don't comment on my pants..
Ish: (Hes just mad 'cos I bed he hat to jack off. HA!) *cough* I liked the new chapter... See, that's the kinda weird demented (even though it wasn't all; the demented) STUFF I like.
Stu: To sum it up, she's the kinky type.
Ish:*MURDERS* I think I'll have to punish STU if he don't SHUT UP!
SStu: *climbs on head* Sorry, My Tallest.
Ish: Okay, good. Now, say something related to the STORY. >_>
Stu: Oh, yeah!! I liked this chapter too, it was a bit... odd to say, but still loved it to pieces! I'm adding you to may Tallest list...
Ish: And, about the art I did, I can't send you a "link" *pout* I need a scanner. Either that, or Stu need to buy one and lemme use it. I COULD try and coppy it down to Paint, but.. yeah... Only if you really wanna see what it even REMOTELY looks like. xD
Stu: WRAP IT UP ALREADY!
Ish: I'll rap you upside the.. *HUGGLES* *remembers the heart beaty thing* That's my new stress reliever! ..Now I sound like your story's my life...
Stu:.it IS your life.
Ish: ...SHUT UP!
Stu: ..long review.
Ish: okay, we done now! *huggles* oh, and NIP says "HIIII, Doritos!" T_T;

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From ANON - Tamagoakura on January 23, 2006
True, true. I forgot about the human shitty-ness part... O.o

Anyhow, lmao, I'm rolling in happy land! XD That was some awsome S&M smut stuff! This could do with more, really. ^_^ lol, fiendish glee... ^_^ That's just awsome. Also, Dib-slut! XD XD XD rotfl, that was so freakin' funny! I'll be dancing about this for days! ^_^
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