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Reviews for VINDICATION

By : Florville
  • From ladylaguna on July 16, 2005
    Hot. :O Not a fan of the blood and humiliation most of the time, but the last part was hot XD

    You're just a chapter MACHINE, aren't you? LOL
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  • From ANON - andalitebandit-6 on July 15, 2005
    Slashy goodness! Awesome! ;d Although it IS sad to see Dib reduced to this, it seems he doesn't mind too much. This alliance is off to a great start already! Pukies for breakfast...Poor Dib. ;-;
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  • From ANON - Cath on July 14, 2005
    Another fantastic chapter. I love the conflict you've set up between both of them, it really resonates. They're both confused by what's going on and it gives the reader the sense that they both - in their own ways - want to continue to explore this. And one little thing: Zim making Dib suck on his finger to make sure the saliva wouldn't burn shows a ton of character development on Zim's part - he's nowhere near as impulsive and rational as he was in the past and I think that could definitely be trouble for Dib down the road.

    Another great chapter.
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  • From ANON - andalitebandit-6 on July 14, 2005
    Oh, and you're not neccesarily disqualified from the contest yet! It can be multichaptered, as long as it's FINISHED. As for the one-sidedness, that could change in future chapters couldn't it? There's still hope! :D
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  • From ANON - andalitebandit-6 on July 14, 2005
    DAMN, YOU WORK FAST! Oo; Ah, I'm glad to see Gir hasn't become completely obedient, and can be his old self at times. Geez, I'll bet Dib never saw THIS coming when he offered Zim an alliance! And becoming Zim's personal slave... the perfect setting for some S & M action! ;d
    And I hope you DO decide to take part in the ZADR Club's disillusionment contest! Most of its members are lurkers, so we're short on participants. ^^;
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  • From ladylaguna on July 14, 2005
    I'm also glad GIR still has shades of his former behavior *heart* Gotta love the GIR!
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  • From ladylaguna on July 14, 2005
    Well well well now XD I had no idea you had added so many chapters. Gah! I'm so glad you fixed the tense problem. Now it's grade A. I shuddered during the third chapter, OMG. I hope eventually Zim becomes more generous toward Dibbeh T-T

    As for the contest, you can find the club at http://z-a-d-r.deviantart.com . The multi-chapterness and one-sidedness in this have already disqualified you from the contest, though :O
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  • From ANON - jesse on July 12, 2005
    your an amazing writer. please continue the story! imma review you after i read every chapter!
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  • From ANON - jesse on July 11, 2005
    you need to keep writing this dammit!!! dammit finish already!!! (make it long. and a good lemony one) that would be nice.
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  • From ANON - andalitebandit_6 on July 11, 2005
    For a first fic, this is AWESOME! ^-^ I love it when Dib finally gets around to hating Earth! And I hope this really DOES turn into a long fic! I'll stay tuned!
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  • From ANON - Cath on July 10, 2005
    Beautifullly done. Dib's sense of hopelessness and frustration really ring out. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ladylaguna on July 10, 2005
    I definitely like where you're going with this. Are you perhaps writing this for the fanfic contest on DeviantART's ZADR club? Because this ALMOST fits into the theme XD;;

    I really like your narrative pacing, though your tense switching is distracting. I would suggest you stick with past tense. I think the story is just FINE in third person, so keep up with that. I like how you described Dib and Zim! Sound sexy...
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  • From ANON - jesse on July 10, 2005
    i like it. sorta dark. you gotta keep writing it. imma keep checking on it okay? your a good writer. why is the story told in the 3rd person? just asking.
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  • From ANON - susuc on July 10, 2005
    continue
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