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Reviews for VINDICATION

By : Florville
  • From ladylaguna on July 20, 2005
    Poor Membrane. He's always abused somehow or another in these stories XD;; That's what he gets for not taking better care of his experiments ;P

    And yummy sex scene! I want moooore. And Zim needs to realize how GOOD Dib's sex is. IMMEDIATELY!
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  • From ANON - Yaoifanboy on July 20, 2005
    OMG!!! Professor Membrane died! *dances* for some reason 1) I absolutely LOVE this chapter, and 2) I couldn't stand prof. Membrane anyway!!! This was a truly dramatic chapter, and I loved the way Dib's character is progressing! Keep up the good work, you chapter machine!
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  • From ANON - BurningSilence on July 20, 2005
    Yes, yes it is a bad idea to piss off a manic-depressive person, I should know, I *am* one.

    Very, *very* nice chapter. Homicidal Dib...I like the idea of that. I think it would've eventually happened anyway, there's only so much someone can take, before their resentment and anger become to much. So I definately like the characterization for Dib. I also like that Zim is no longer the Tallest doormat, (no matter how much I like the Tallest), it's about time he stood up to them.


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  • From ANON - Insanity on July 20, 2005
    But, pissing off a manic depressive person can also lead to the ruling of an entire planet!

    I crave more *holds out hands*
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  • From ANON - andalitebandit-6 on July 20, 2005
    Ah, how quickly Zim returns to normal in the absense of stimulus! And what's this? Getting Dib to set up his own father?! Oo; Can he do that? No, Dib! Your Daddy neglected you guys a little but he's a good man! Don't bring him into Zim's slaughter/slavery/or whatever Zim has planned for him! Can't you see that NOTHING you do will be good enough for the psycho alien? Oh I can't look! *covers eyes*
    (Next chapter comes along)...*peeks*
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  • From ANON - Insanity on July 20, 2005
    Wow, now that is interesting. Evil for leaving it at such a cliffhanger ;)

    Definatly can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Cath on July 19, 2005
    Wow, this story is really getting interesting - definitely an accurate chapter title! This is really showing how far Dib is falling, and yet, it's almost in character for him. He's following Zim with the same zeal that he used to pursue the little Irken. So even though it's a complete about-face, his fanaticism is still there, only aimed in a new, frightening direction.

    And I really like that Zim doesn't trust Dib yet. After all they've been through, he's certainly well within his rights to be untrusting.

    The great thing about this story is, as you can probably guess, the characterization. Even though Dib is doing something that could be considered shocking in other circumstances, you've presented it in such a way that it is believable and realistic and quite chillingly conceivable that both of the characters could, down the road, come to this.

    Kudos,
    Cath
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  • From ANON - andalitebandit-6 on July 19, 2005
    Ahh, I've had my ZADR slash fix for the day! ;d Oh, and I DO so love it when Zim gets possessive and starts calling Dib "Mine!" I love it so very much! X3
    And for being written after working 12 hour shifts, this fic is excellent!
    Hey, I just thught of something...Gir was 'guarding' them the whole time wasn't he? I wonder if letting him watch is a mistake that's gonna irritate them later on to no end!
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  • From ANON - Yaoi Fanboy on July 19, 2005
    YAY more smutty lemons! I love this story so much. *adds to faves* This story kills! I love how you kept them mostly in character the whole way through this!!! Update soon please, MORE LEMONY GOODNESS!!! XD *peace*

    -Jake
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  • From ANON - jesse on July 19, 2005
    its reely good. me likey
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  • From ANON - andalitebandit-6 on July 18, 2005
    Wow. I'm guessing he used his status as Professor Membrane's son to get access to most of this stuff? Or just used his own hacker skills? But then, why the skin-tight get up? Ah, now I have to play the waiting game again. And you DID promise the next chapter would be longer...Yay! ;D
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  • From ANON - Insanity on July 18, 2005
    I have the cutest picture in my mind of Dib trying to stay awake when you wrote that. Loved this chapter as well can't wait to read more :)
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  • From ANON - Insanity on July 17, 2005
    Oh I do so wish your chapters were longer, but I suppouse you wouldn't be able to get them out to us as quickly if that were the case. At any rate I do love the the story. I've always loved the thought of Dib just giving up on his race and helping Zim, but you turned it into a much greater thought. It's all so yummy :)
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  • From ANON - andalitebandit-6 on July 17, 2005
    Oh yeah! You're right! Sorry, but I haven't seen my IZ DVD's in 4 years...Man this is getting exciting! Hey, Dib's still shirtless, right? Last time I checked the only thing they gave him back was his pants. And how inconspicuously can he go snooping around when he's bare-chested with a metal collar around his neck? Oo; I'm dying to know how he's gonna pull this off!
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  • From ANON - andalitebandit-6 on July 16, 2005
    Ah! What a refreshing change from the cliche "The Tallest break the -You're not a real invader-" deal. I wonder what 'little escapade' they were refering to? Oh, yes, this was a very short chapter, but that's fine! Your almost DAILY updates and quality writing more than make up for it! Update soonish!
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