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Reviews for VINDICATION

By : Florville
  • From ANON - andalitebandit-6 on July 28, 2005
    When life gives you lemons I say horray for smut! XD Oh, but this was good! With Zim continuously missinterpreting Dib's horniness and such. Is he going to REGRET this again? >< Meh, glad to see Gir's a little ZADR fan too!
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  • From ANON - Invader Spork on July 28, 2005
    Write more! Awesome story, most definitely awesome.
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  • From ANON - Insanity on July 27, 2005
    This is what awaits me right before I got to bed. I love you for this, may I just say that? See, if we are all patient enough you deliver one of the best lemon scenes i've read. Zim's clueness at certain moments was a bit cute I might add. Lovely chapter overall. :)
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  • From ANON - littleshipper on July 27, 2005
    YES!! I loved it! XD I've had such a good day today, and this was just the icing on the cake. I'd also like to say that even though I've been impatiently waiting for more smut, I like how you space it out. I like how the story has a plot. It keeps people interested and builds up anticipation. Plus, when you don't have a sex scene in every chapter, it makes it all the more enjoyable when you decide to write one. Keep up the great work!!
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  • From ANON - BurningSilence on July 27, 2005
    HOORAY FOR GRAPHIC INTERSPECIES BOY-LUVIN!!! I loved it! I loved it goooood! And if they're going to rule the planet, I don't think they'll need to BUY Dib a new System of a Down T-Shirt...lol
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  • From ANON - hellsoldier (too lazy to log in) on July 27, 2005
    its a good story!! like i always sayyy keep writing it. and the short chapters add alot of drama. i like that. buuutttt... i still think it needs more yaoi.. *dont ask* but keep writing it the way you want to, dont listen to me!! *im an idiot!!!*
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  • From ANON - Yaoifanboy on July 27, 2005
    Ahh, the death and destruction. It brings tears of joy to my eyes, just watching Dib killing people mercillessly with Zim.

    Great chapter, once again! I love ALL of the chapters you have put out! You must continue this still, or I'll DIE!! ^_^; Don't let me die, that would be sad.

    ~Jake
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  • From ANON - Insanity on July 27, 2005
    You're welcome. It was nice to be able to see the damage that had been done. I also love what you called the prime minister and pope, because it just seems like something Jhonen would have done.

    Be waiting for the next chapter :)
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  • From ANON - Kayu Silver on July 27, 2005
    YESSS! Blow those Assosiated Press imbeciles to smithereens! Whooo! *dances* Ahem. Sorry, but the joy of the IZ-universe's general populace being decimated due to their own stupidity amuses me. *grin* Not to mention, I have a dedicated chapter! This is the only chapter dedicated to me that I know of in existance. Which may or may not explain the hyper joyfulness. So far I still love it! This would go on my favorites list if I had one... Maybe I'll make one, just so I can put it there! Aaaand, there were only two new chapters when I showed up again. That's weirdly comforting...

    I'd say I can't wait but I probably won't have to wait anyway,

    Kayu
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  • From ANON - andalitebandit_6 on July 27, 2005
    What happened to Zim regretting letting Dib get intimate with him? What's with the sudden lying down on his lap and letting the human fondle his antennae? Not that I'm complaining, just wondering if I missed something...cool, we got 4 pages coming after this?! Can't wait!
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  • From on July 27, 2005
    *claps* I really loved it! Lots of short chaps though... *sigh* Man this is my first Invader Zim Story and hehehehehe I've grown to love. Please update when you can! YAOI/SLASH ALL THE WAY!
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  • From ANON - andalitebandit_6 on July 26, 2005
    Oooh, you're gonna hook us up another fix soon?! Can't wait! ;D Eww, dead bodies Xp And damn your short chapters! >< More soon! :D
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  • From ANON - GothycCoalChambr on July 26, 2005
    yay, more chapters! everytime i check this site there's more for this story. good going! man, Dib sure is evil in this one. I like the evil Dib. keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Insanity on July 26, 2005
    Hmm, once again things are really starting to unfold and once again you leave me on the edge of my seat which I adore about you. The short chapters leave me wanting more in a great way. It leaves me feeling giddy(if you will) about wanting to read your story even more the following day, especially with lets say a chapter such as this.

    Glad to know the feedback helps the story :)
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  • From ladylaguna on July 26, 2005
    *bows to Hellsoldier and YaoiFanboy* Thank you for the kind words about my story XD Good thing I love this one so much or I never would have read them ;P

    I'm still trying to get used to the ultra-short chapters but I like how the story is going. Great pacing and yay for devastation :O
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