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Reviews for VINDICATION

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  • From ANON - BeeBop on August 03, 2005
    Hmm...I thought I reviewed the last chapter. Maybe i didn't. But anyways, Really good chapter. Aww, Maybe when Dib gets taken to where ever, Zim will come to the rescue! and Screw that up! Then be in major jepordy himself! Whoo! Haha, great chapter. Keep 'em coming!
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  • From ANON - andalitebandit-6 on August 03, 2005
    So is Dib's fate to be a martyr? What a trooper... but surely Zim won't allow the puny human government to take his slave away? Or will he decide the Dib's expendable?
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  • From ANON - Insanity on August 03, 2005
    Lovely suspense in this chapter. You seem to put every genre in your story and do it perfectly, I was holding my breath through this chapter and cringed slightly when Dib got caught. When you can get reactions out of your readers I think that's when you succed very well at writing. :)
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  • From ANON - hellsoldier (too lazy to log in) on August 03, 2005
    ....leave mr.stinkums out of this!!! *runs away with my socks* and yes. enjoying very much so!
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  • From ANON - Dimitri Aidan on August 03, 2005
    There is something almost sweet, in a Zim-ish way, about him telling Dib about all of that stuff (Even if he left out the part about always getting his Tallest eaten by blobs...) If it was from anyone else it'd be shrug worthy, but because it's Zim, a paranoid little alien with some serious attachment issues, it's more than that.
    *Sigh* And of course now Dibby is upset. He shouldn't be, he should just realize that Zim is Zim and that's how he relates. Ohwell...
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  • From Makota2112 on August 03, 2005
    I was very pleased to see Dib grow a bit of backbone. Sub/Dom is always fun, but if it's taken to extremes in a fic it becomes rather dull to read after awhile.

    I wonder if this is a step closer to Zim treating Dib like an eqaual...or a step back.

    I'm sorry to hear that your ill. Rest up and don't force anything, I for one would be willing to wait for a chapter or two before I combust in anticipation.


    Get well soon!
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  • From ANON - andalitebandit-6 on August 03, 2005
    YES! Dib grew a backbone! XD I've been wondering what Zim would do if Dib ever fought back. But I wonder what it's gonna cost him? The great and mighty invader Zim is not one to be denied. What will Zim do to his former little human concubine? I wanna thank you for updating this most awesomest fic, even though you're sick, and hope you get better soon! ^-^
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  • From ANON - BeeBop on August 03, 2005
    Hmm..are the characters starting to get a bit moody? Hehe.. Maybe they are going through PMS...lmao. xD Great chapter. Whoot, whoot! Keep busy! YAY!
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  • From ANON - Insanity on August 03, 2005
    Wow, it was so nice to see a bit of the history of the other tallests. I know which episode that was from and it was so sad that it didn't get fully made.

    You went a bit deeper with the character development in the chapter and it clearly showed as in they were able to hold more of a conversation than in the usual chapters. It was nice to see Zim actually allow Dib to help him rather than let his ego stand in the way, and Dib grew a bit more of a backbone as well it seems.

    I really hope you feel better *hugs*
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  • From ANON - littleshipper on August 02, 2005
    Wow, 32 chapters already! To be totally honest, a fanfic has to be really good to keep me interested for that long. I'm quite impatient lol But this one still has me on the edge of my seat. You definitally have talent! Great job on keeping them in character. That's really hard to come across since ZADR itself is OOC. But you have it nailed! You didn't put tons of fluff in it or have them just jump into bed all of the sudden. You made it real. And it just keeps getting better and better. I can't wait for the next chapter! :)
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  • From ANON - makota on August 02, 2005
    *Cheers*

    I like you. You're one of those authors who updates frequently. *grins*

    I have to say that I'm floored by the dedication and very touched. Thank you. And what a lovely, (if teasing) chapter that was. Though, some action is always welcome, I like how you've made it realistic. For example: They're not Always in the mood, and I can't say I blame Zim. I wouldn't be too keen to hop into bed if my pak was broken...despite the temptation to do so. It's obvious that there is still some feelings of distrust on Zim's part (and rightly so) however he seems to be opening up. I think my favorite part of this chapter was Zim's protectiveness over GIR...very sweet...in a snarky Zim sort of way. And yet he still allowed Dib to borrow him.

    I'm loving this.
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  • From ANON - andalitebandit-6 on August 02, 2005
    ...I meant Octogon ^^; *sigh* Zim's STILL resisting the delicious human? JUST ADMIT IT, ZIM! YOU LOVE HIM! YOU LOVE HIM GOOD! ;D Hmm, Dib and Gir on a mission...I have to keep reminding myself Gir isn't consistantly idiodic in this fic. It's an odd concept to get used to.
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  • From ANON - hellsoldier (too lazy to log in) on August 02, 2005
    ha ha ha i looved this chapter. lmao!!! zimmy dibby goodness in every bite!!! what will zim do next? stay tuned to find out!!!
    ha ha ::gleeness!!:: i love this story. you rock person i dont know. you rock my really smelly socks!!!
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  • From ANON - Dimitri Aidan on August 02, 2005
    Ahhh...man, I do so adore this story. Zim is just such an idiot, but in a throughly adorable kind of way. He's obviously upset at himself for not listening to Dib (Mayhaps resentful that Dib dare be right where Zim was wrong) and that he can't function without his pak but rather than let Dibby make it better he just shoves him away.

    Reminds me of a guy I dated in high school. lol
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  • From ANON - Insanity on August 02, 2005
    I was a bit worried you weren't gonna update today, of course I have no idea what scheduale you are on so where you live could be hours from what i'm thinking. It just worries me when an author doesn't update cause they then just kind of forget about their story and this story has become an enjoyment that I like reading each day.

    It's sad to see Dib being pushed away from Zim so much, but it's so understandable because of Zim's character. It's the reason why I don't like all those mushy ZADRs, they just aren't believable enough. You seem to be hitting the nail on the head so well with how Zim is developing, that when and if the time ever comes for Zim to accept emotions in the near future of the story, I think us as the readers could accept it as him being in character.

    Can't wait for the next chapter.
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