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Reviews for VINDICATION

By : Florville
  • From ANON - Goat on August 12, 2005
    And cue Dib ruining the moment again. Ah, well; it's all but impossible not to in the presence of one like Zim, I guess. He'll get over it, I'm sure. He's just moody. Hehe...
    I enjoyed Dib's comment about the Canadian having the only sense in the whole room; it's all too true, isn't it? And I'm sure, had he been really paying attention, President man (if he reflects our current one at all, anyways) would have been appalled at the fact that the world was being bombed and taken over by a homosexual boy and alien. Which is why the fact that Zim had his hand up Dib's shirt during the call appealed to me so, I think. In your face, homophobic jerks. Heh.
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  • From ANON - Pait on August 12, 2005
    mmmmmmmmmmnnnnnnnnnn!!!!..... I enjoyed so much this story....... I'm decided to take your story and make a doujinshi an then publish it on deviantart.... COMING SOON....
    P.D: Yo hablo español...espero que puedas entender mi ingles... chao.
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  • From Makota2112 on August 12, 2005
    *purrs* That was hot!

    I esp liked Dib's character in this. He's becoming more bold and Zim's allowing it. I think they're both progressing nicely.

    I'd say more, but yet again I'm running the risk of latness at work.

    Wonderful job!
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  • From ANON - Switch on August 12, 2005
    I liked this chapter. especially the way you write ZIM. it was toatlly believeable.
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  • From ANON - sylver on August 12, 2005
    awww zims going soft :(

    heehee, he was so mcuh better when he was cruel to dib...

    can zim be cruel to prez man? like, more than just killing his family? (yes i know im a little sadistic, but who isnt?)
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  • From ANON - Insanity on August 12, 2005
    You know my feelings on the newest chapter, but I still wanted to give you a review because I thought it was the right thing to do, and tell you that everything is turning out great. You have a knack for being able to keep Zim in character no matter the situation :)
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  • From ANON - Yaoifanboy on August 11, 2005
    "Grab me a soda"

    "Yes, my Tallest"

    Best. Line. Ever.

    OOH!!! Another smexx scene!!!! gawd, you're on fire! It was only two chapters away from each other! *giddy like a little schoolgirl* that was awesome... though... I just can't imagine Zim as a bottom... in either form of the word... O_o

    Great new chappie, love it!
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  • From ANON - Goat on August 11, 2005
    Oh, wow. I'm all psyched and pumped up now; I can't help but thinking this chapter had to be one of the best sex scenes yet. And it was dedicated to me! *Squeals in a very fangirl-ish way*
    Ahem. Now that that's out of the way. I felt this was a very, veeeery nice chapter, and definitely one of the best so far. I loved the fact President Man could see them only as a kid and a person in an alien costume, for some reason; it seemed to sum up the great ignorance and stupidity of their world very effectively, to me, as he could only see what he wanted to see, even in the face of such danger. And so arrogant, too; it was hard not to want to see them all get bombed after such a display.
    ...And then, there was the sex scene. I'm almost beyond words when it comes to that. Ahh, great stuff, that. I think I'm still too stunned from it to make an intelligent comment on it, just yet. Just...wow.
    I do so love this story.
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  • From ANON - BeeBop on August 11, 2005
    Sorry to hear about the job. But, the chapter was nice! And so was the Art work. It was very good.
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  • From ANON - BurningSilence on August 11, 2005
    First off, I'm sorry to hear you were fired. That's awful! I hope you feel better though...You'll find a new job, I'm sure. *hugs*

    Now, as for your chapter:

    So sweet! And Tallest Zim...it *does* have a nice ring to it...lol

    Well, like I said, feel better!

    Love and Light,

    BurningSilence
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  • From Makota2112 on August 11, 2005
    I'll certainly check out your artwork.

    My sympathies about the job. I only hope you can find another quickly (that you enjoy). I know what it's like to be struggling...tis much suckage.

    So Zim going up against the Tallest? I wondered if you were going to go down that route. I've seen it in fics before but never with the use of human slaves. Kudos for creativity.

    I'm looking forward to the next chapter and I hope things turn around for you. :)
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  • From ANON - Switch on August 11, 2005
    Good chapter. Im sorry to hear about your job. my dad has union problems too. people can be assholes. but hey im here as much as i can be. *huggles*
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  • From ANON - Sylver on August 11, 2005
    YAY DESTRUCTION!!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Goat on August 11, 2005
    Ooh... Zim, a tallest? I must agree I like the sound of that, if only because we fangirls have a tendency to enjoy such things. And quite the interesting turn of events it's beginning to take at such a prospect.
    I enjoyed the interaction in this chapter as well; though the affection may be subtle (at times), it's clearly there, and after all the time and build-up it took to get there, it's all too gratifying. Wonderful, how you have kept the boys so like themselves, so in-character, and managed to make it all so plausible all the same.
    On another note, I'm very sorry to hear about your unfair dismissal. Even if it will do little good, I do hope things look brighter for you, and soon.
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  • From ANON - littleshipper on August 11, 2005
    I'm really sorry to hear about your job. :- That really sucks. They'll get theres tho, karma comes back around. I don't know the details of why you were fired, but whatever it was try not to let it get you down too much. I'm sorry it wasn't fair.

    But anyway, this chapter was short but I liked it. Hmm... Tallest Zim. I like it :) Keep up the great work! You have such awesome ideas
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