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Reviews for VINDICATION

By : Florville
  • From ANON - Burning_Silence on August 21, 2005
    Ahhh, angst. Damnable alien egos. I feel badly for Dib. I can't help but think this may be harder on him than it would be on Zim because a) he's WAY younger than Zim (think back to Tak; The Hideous New Girl, Zim is over 50! at least!), and b) Zim was his first. And even though that was the same case for Zim, Dib hasn't had as much 'life experience', so this probably REALLY threw him for a loop!

    *sigh* oh well, fluff later on! They *will* make up, right?

    ^_^

    BurningSilence

    P.S.: I'm thrilled you like my story! And I don't know anyone in the medical field, I just like to study everything!
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  • From ANON - Insanity on August 20, 2005
    I always love your political aspect in the story. The way you have the characters act in a serious situation is just lovely. It was nice to see just a bit of comforting coming from Zim towards Dib, small gestures can speak volumes. :)
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  • From ANON - Krimzon on August 20, 2005
    Yay, plot! Man, I can't wait for the Tallest to get to Earth and for Zim to stick it to them *snicker*. But I also can't wait for more ZADR cute, smuty greatness...*goes back to read 'Legs' for the third time*
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  • From ANON - Kayu Silver on August 19, 2005
    I'm still trying to muster up creativity for my reveiw, but I cannot continue reading this without pointing out the absolute hilarity of the last two sentences. I'm still giggling like a crazed school-girl as I type this.
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  • From ANON - Meep on August 19, 2005
    Another lemony fresh vic--er---chapter! ^.^ Wonderful job! Sorry to hear about the photographer welching like that! Had something similar happen to me on my parents 29th anniv. I just kept the money and took the pictures myself XD Anyhow, I can't wait for more!
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  • From EscagirlUK on August 19, 2005
    Nice sex scene! Woo! ::fans self:: And, ahahaha! "Come to my larder," said the Spider to the Fly. Or in this case, the Zim to the Tallest. And, ooh, hope that camdera is focused above waist level - poor Dib would be oh so embarassed. I'm still waiting for a scene where they're having sex in front of the talky-to-world-leader-screen and accidentally turn it on. *^^;*
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  • From ANON - Insanity on August 19, 2005
    I really love how crafty you make Zim at times, that in itself causes him to stay in character.

    It's so nice to see how commited you are to this story even with so much going on right now, you even make me wanna get back into writing :)
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  • From ANON - andalitebandit-6 on August 19, 2005
    Smut scene, and even more smut hinted to come! :D Ah, but how fun would it be if everything we did went according to plan? Though I'm glad Zim's warming up to Dib, I'd still like to see more conflict going on. Doesn't the Armada have it's own arsenal of weapons? And defenses? I know in most movies, despite that, the humans usually end up winning, but still...PLOT! :3 Update soonish!
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  • From ANON - Yaoifanboy on August 19, 2005
    Forgive me, my tallest! I could not be at the computer to report to you for the last few chapters!

    The story seems to be running smoothly, with hillarious comedy at the end of this chapter between Invader Zim and the Dib-stink! A great story, please continue! *salute*

    ~Jake
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  • From Makota2112 on August 19, 2005
    Hee...the Tallest are in for a surprise.

    I sympathise with you; people bailing when you need a job done is awful.

    But we, your loyal fans, appreciate the update despite the troubles!
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  • From ANON - [pry on August 18, 2005
    very good i think u acutally got EVEN BETTE!! u seem more comfortable with writing and mabey writing them a bit longer lately? i dunno but ur improvmetn has defiantly made reading ur stories even better ^_^ havent see u lately so....miss u! hope things are getting better ^_^
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  • From ANON - KRimzon on August 18, 2005
    Yay! That is what this chapter made me say. Man, those legs have always been my favorite thing about Zim, but now *tear of joy*...

    Glad you like my artwork! It's a fairly new account, and I don't have a decent scanner, but when I do, I'll be sure to put up a pic dedicated to this fic!
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  • From ANON - BurningSilence on August 18, 2005
    Interesting...^_^

    I'm glad Zim decided to have Dib come with him aboard the Massive. I'm kind of sad for Red and Purple, though...Oh well, it has to happen. They're like two big kids, who just happen to be mean...

    And I hope things are going well for you with your job. I'm sure things will work out, somehow.

    Much love!

    Burning Silence
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  • From Makota2112 on August 18, 2005
    Woot! That was kinky and steamy! My fav combination!


    *purrrrrrrrrrrrrr*


    *wipes drool from chin* ahem, anyway. Can't wait to see them take down the massive. Am also curious as to what Dib is going to do for a disguise.

    Loverly chapter.
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  • From ANON - Insanity on August 18, 2005
    Take all the time you need, you're having a rough time so you deserve a writer's break :)

    Sex seems to be a good place to go if you have writers block, it doesn't hurt the story at all and helps a bit with character development considering they have bumps to get over with that anyway. You're doing great *hugs*
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