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Reviews for VINDICATION

By : Florville
  • From ANON - Reyku Sama on October 26, 2005
    Oh, yeah, I was thinking about that after I rewiewed. Took Zim that long to remember the Vortian who is his friend. XD j/k Oh, wow, I completely forgot about gir until you put him in there. Wonderful chapter! I'll be standing by for the next one!
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  • From ANON - Ryu Forte on October 26, 2005
    Yay! Gir rocks! *Holds plushy of gir* ^^ Another great chapter! Go Zim and his crew, off to save Dib! Can't wait for the next update!
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  • From XxSilentNightRainxX on October 26, 2005
    Heh.. thanks for putting the link to my fic on this chapter! Anyway! ^_^ I loved this chapter! It was really good and made me feel all happy.. lol.
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  • From ANON - andalitebandit-6 on October 26, 2005
    Wow...even I would've thought that not EVERY irken on board trusted Zim...I mean, didn't any of them know about the time he was sent to that one planet where he systematically sacrified all of his teammates so that the Tallest would give him superweapons or something? There was that crystal girl, the guy with the constant headach, Scooge...but anyway, the loyalty IS endearing! More soon! :3
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  • From ANON - Sylver on October 26, 2005
    Whee! we get to see 777 again!!

    (thats a vortian i do like ^_^)

    and dont worry about my wanting to murder all vortians. munin died. and thats good. he was cruel...
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  • From ANON - EscagirlUK on October 26, 2005
    Eeee! Go Zim! Rescue pris'ner 777, and kick the ass of the rebel scum! ...I have the sudden urge to write an Invader Zim/Star Wars crossover. Hmm. Dib with a lightsaber. Ni~ce! ::coughs:: Anyways. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - BurningSilence on October 26, 2005
    Oh goodness! I missed an update! But in regards to BOTH chapters...wonderful! I hope Zim can 'fix' Dib...Dib shouldn't die (especially after they've gotten this far!). It just wouldn't be fair. -_- I'm eager to see what happens next, I'm on the edge of my seat!
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  • From ANON - Kharn on October 26, 2005
    I loved that chapter, the scene where the soldiers address Zim as Tallest in one voice reminds me of Dead Poets Society.
    The swift updates rule, and so do you!
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  • From ANON - Krimzon on October 25, 2005
    Oh, wow. Having the entire crew stand up for Zim like that was so very touching of the heart. I l oved it! And I never would have even thought about that Vortian prisioner 777 that had appered in an earlier chapter being able to help! Wow. The speech to the officers was very well planned and even more well written. You have given me renewed hope for the Vindication future (for I seriously thought that either Zim wasn't going to be Tallest, or Dib was going to die...)!

    I love how Zim had gained the loyalty of the crew just by being civil toward them and treating them as equals. Something that you had begun to set up in earlier chapters and made the story more complete, when all of the over six hundred crew members stood and swore their loyalty to Zim. I'm sure there are better ways in which to compliment such an amazing story and fatastic chapter, but unlike SOME beautimus people, I am not an Engil Lit major...XD

    As it tis, you'll just have to be happy with the above comments, some girlish shreiking, and a very heatfelt glomp.

    *girlish shreiking*

    *run, jump, GLOMP!*
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  • From ANON - Reyku Sama on October 25, 2005
    Oh, well, that answered my question...Please dun kill the Dibbeh, that would make me sad...Damn you Vortians! DAMN YOU! *Shakes fist at Vortian prisoners* You'll all pay for what you have done to the Dib!
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  • From ANON - Ryu Forte on October 25, 2005
    *Sniffle* Poor Dib...I don't want his head to explode...only gir is alowed to do that...wait...whatever happened to him anyway? Can't wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - andalitebandit-6 on October 25, 2005
    Well, I was HALF right! It WAS a security mechanism! But how does Zim hope to save Dib if he kills the only scientists in the universe that know how to deactivate the security feature? Sure, he said he wouldn't talk, but aren't there ways around that? Truth syrums, memory extraction devices, etc? What happened to all that superior irken technology? Oh, well...ZIM SAVE THE DIB!!!
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  • From ANON - Sylver on October 25, 2005
    OOOHHH! do we get torture scenes now???? pwease?? (im sadistic arent i?)

    that bloody vortian better talk, or I"LL GO AFTER IT!!

    hehe *cough*
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  • From ANON - dramaelf on October 25, 2005
    I'm back....I was sawmped with my work for class. I really happy Zim found Dib but now poor Dib is comotos and Zim needs to twist all of their horns till they tell him how to save Dib.
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  • From ANON - Kharn on October 25, 2005
    I am worried for Lokis's saftey now, Zim is very cruel and cant quite come to terms with the fact that the Vortian actualy helped and cared about Dib.
    While it is a drastic time for Zim he really should slow down and have a lookat the world outside his own.
    Hoping for dib to pull through and for more chapters, Kharn.


    Ps: Thank you for the message at the top, *huggles*
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