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Reviews for VINDICATION

By : Florville
  • From ANON - vilmary on November 17, 2005
    ...But I wanted the muffins... oh well. Still, good lord:((Dib shook his head. “Zim…let me just put it this way: when sex is good,” he grinned stupidly, “I mean, really good, getting banged up a little isn’t so bad.”)) True-er words have been barely spoken. t bad that people would find it amusing to argue in your revews, Im so sorry. Well... DELICIOUS WEENIE!!
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  • From ANON - Yaoifanboy on November 17, 2005
    (me while reading the new sex scene)

    Oh... my... GOD!! *nosebleed over his keyboard*

    *dies of bloodloss*

    I LOVE IT!!! That was BEYOND hot!!
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  • From ANON - SomekindofFreak on November 17, 2005
    Nice comeback chapter XD I love possesive Zim! O.O
    Mooore...possesive "MINE"-ness!!! XP
    Oh, and I began reading Seeing Red the few days there were no updates. Its very good too...i think ill review it...?

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  • From ANON - Chess 77 on November 17, 2005
    Yay! Dib lives! I always liked Purple, he's cute in a stupid kinda way so I'm glad he's (seemingly!) going to live. I love this story sooo much, especially evil/sadistic Zim. Can't wait for an update and thank you for dedicating a chapter to me ^-^
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  • From ANON - Reyku Sama on November 17, 2005
    This must be one of your best chapters yet! It's quite interesting what you did about the connectors, it's very orriginal. Yes, what will become of Tak and Purple? And will Red still meet his demise at Zim's hand? I'll be waiting for your next update!
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  • From ANON - Ryu Forte on November 17, 2005
    And again, your very welcome! I love this chapter! I really hope you don't plan o killing Purple during the operation...He's my favorite Tallest next to Zim...Oo; Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - andalitebandit-6 on November 17, 2005
    *Drools for tub scene* It's all so reminiscent of their first time, when Zim called him "Mine." And I HAVE read in a parenting magazine that sex promotes some protein or something that makes your body create more brain cells. *shrug*
    Vengful Dib? I'd have thought he wouldn't want anything to do with any of them ever again...
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  • From XxSilentNightRainxX on November 17, 2005
    Heh. Great chapter! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Tamagoakura on November 17, 2005
    Maybe... O.o That was AWSOME! I'm gonna be grinning like a fool for te rest of the day! ^_^
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  • From ANON - littleshipper on November 17, 2005
    Wow. I needed a few minutes to recover myself before I could even write this review. That was just... wow. You really have a way with smut! Not many people can pull it off, but you're amazingly skilled at it. I swear if this wasn't a fanfiction it would make a great scifi novel. I also want to say I like how you made Zim and Dib act more like their old selves again by challenging each other. It's little things like that that make this story so believable. So I worship you now! *bows* And for lack of anything more intelligent to say... damn that was a great sex scene!
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  • From ANON - InvaderMonkey on November 17, 2005
    and that's y i love him soooooooooooooo much! PLEEEEASE DON'T HURT MY RED!!!! this chapter was frikin hilarious! because of the whole i'll never understand humans and the conversation in the tub! i wonder what zim did to dib scared me for a minute i thought zim really was going to fuck his brains out or hurt him....but as soon as dibby liked it i found it a very...enthusiastic love dance( ROTFL) ~_^
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  • From ANON - Switch on November 17, 2005
    Tak IS cool I always had a thing for Tak. sure shes full of vengence and such but its alright when its well placed. Trust me I would know I extract vengence on a regualr basis. *huggles* thatnks for more good stuff
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  • From ANON - Sylver on November 17, 2005
    damn... just damn.. we need more of that!! argh!! *fans self*

    i had never considered the use of bething gel as lube though. lol, in my haste to get to the smut i skipped the part where they got in the bath, and im reading it and im all "what tub? when did they get in the tub? *scrolls up* oh!"

    i'm hoping to get the next chap from Shini soon, I got one of my friends to give it a quick beta while shes busy, and i got a simple "no better than what i could do" -_- not asking him to beta my work again...

    and dont be sad! if I get a free moment sometime soon it should be up soonish!!

    *lurve*
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  • From ANON - BurningSilence on November 17, 2005
    Well! Zim and Dib were sure...enthusiastic! (Oddly enough, I happened to be listening to S+M: A Love Song--by KidneyTheives. It went along *really* well while I was reading this chapter...) But other than that, I'm really anxious to see what happens with Red...and why would he try to hit Purple? Although, I guess under stress and pressure...hmmm...Oh the ANGST! ^_^;; Ugh, I hate the short reviews I've been leaving...but I really like this story, and it kills me I can't think of anything else to say! >_< Maybe when I'm feeling better I'll have more worthwhile things to say, ne? ^_^

    BurningSilence
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  • From ANON - Kuragari Okami on November 17, 2005
    Ooooooo....a fight.....yay? *giggles insanely* AAAAHHHHH!!! what a chapter...weeeewww!YAY!! Things are semi back to normal! *rubs hands together* I can't wait until dib crakcs open one of those vortians! Woot! gore! *ahem* ahahahahaahaaaa!I lurv it all *glomp* write more sooooonnn!!!!>^.~
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