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Reviews for VINDICATION

By : Florville
  • From ANON - Krimzon on November 22, 2005
    Oh my goodness. I knew you were brilliant, but DAMN!! The detail you went into with Dib's work with the chemicals blew me the fuck away. And you managed to describe it in a way most would understand! My WORD!! I'm deeply impressed, considering I nearly failed chemistry (stupid-waste-of-my-time-class) back in the day. And they way the crew just assembled around Dib while he was working, an advanced species so impressed by the workings of a human was a fantastic touch.

    And cameo goondess? I beleive you will understand how happy I am when I explain to you that I was only able to write this reveiw after running around my room, crashing into walls (as I was running on tiled floor while wearing socks *shakes head at self*) and laughing like maniac.

    Okay, maybe I wasn't that excited...but I felt like doing it, damnit.

    And is it just me, or did anyone else get a wonderful chill going up their spine at that last line? I know I did.
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  • From ANON - wouldn\'t-u-like-2-no on November 21, 2005
    JV is god and you are an angel. or more lieky he's the devil and your his demon of seductive FF. Eith r ones good, whatever floats your boat.
    I like this side of Dib to Zim.
    Sex is good. Pardon, sex is REALY good.
    I completely forgot about the Armada. i had assumed they would follow Zim as the others had. Good for you. the plot thickens!
    update soon lease. your doing really well.
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  • From ANON - dramaelf on November 20, 2005
    I'm back :) papers papers papers all last week long. fun last two chapter truth hurts, cute lol
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  • From ANON - Kuragari Okami on November 20, 2005
    *sniff* Hey! ....*grumbles* anyways.....You updated soo soon! YAY!! that makes me happy! Mwahahahahahahahahahaaaaaaaaa*cough*hahahahahaaaaa! no Diiibby in this chap*sniff* Oh well...but now Im worried...whay take such a HUGE risk of the ship going Explodey on them? hmmmm...they better have a backup plan or something if things go wrong....continue continue!!!>.
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  • From ANON - One-Eyed Jester on November 20, 2005
    I totally understand your labor of love. As an artist i can realate in complete... completeness? (there goes all my eloquancy lol) I can tell that you trule love writing this fic. So many original developments have taken place with such a flow that if it hade bekome irksome or irritating you would have killed it long ago. In any event i'm really glad you didn't. There are so many scenes that just made me go wow and re read them over and over because they were so perfect. Like the scene where the entire crew of the Massive salutes zim and he's just completely floored by the loyalty. And the scene where gir is supposed to translate the irken codes int archaic runes was so precious because he switches back and forth between the red and turquoise eyes. it makes him almost... sentient. Like gir evolved from being an android and is actually alive and can make serious choices for himself that arn't completely random spaz phases. Ironic that in the cartoon GIR was supposed to be a practical joke on Zim and ended up having emotions and compassion where all the SIRs were mindless drones isn't it?

    Also, because i got carried away with my thoughts, i forgot to say something.
    THANK YOU SO MUCH YOU ARE LOOOOOOVE!!!!
    I can't believe you dedicated a chapter to me! I feel special and lurved. *happy dance* ^.^ And i'm a reccord holder? wowsies. I feel really happy... ^.^

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  • From ANON - Sylver on November 20, 2005
    oooohh, workholes. I like wormholes (i swear it was Farscape that got me hooked on wormholes)
    but whats gonna happen to red?? i like the fact that purples all good, but what about stubborn little red??

    the whole lockdown thing is rattling around my mind right now, I can see why Zim would want in place but for those Irkens who dont know about Zim being the new tallest, wouldn't they think that something has gone horribly wrong? or is that the idea??
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  • From on November 19, 2005
    Well well well, an inturesting plan, it is! ^_^ *Dances for the plan.* Teehee? *Dances for no reason.*
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  • From on November 19, 2005
    Your writing is amazing~ :D This is honestly one of the best Invader Zim fics I've stumbled upon in a long while.

    I was feeling homicidal earlier today, but reading your fic for a few hours to catch up to where you are made me feel better. XP
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  • From XxSilentNightRainxX on November 19, 2005
    Lockdown, huh? Sounds like fun. Good luck to Zim!
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  • From ANON - Reyku Sama on November 19, 2005
    Ah, I see, trust me , I know how you feel. I'm also doing several different stories and co-writing on a few as well. So sleepless nights and caffine are just part of the job for me only because I never do my homework! XD It's impossible for me to fail anything! I shouldn't boasts though, I'd be liable to fail the next quarter...
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  • From ANON - Ryu Forte on November 19, 2005
    Well, I'm not all that sure. He did just randomely decide to rebell on his own planet in an only Dib type of fashion, but I didn't think that he was the type to enjoy anothers pain...Actually, I take that back...I think he's just fine. I watched the entire series the other day and found that Dib was quite horrible to Zim, but never his own kind, sure he hated them, but I don't think that he would really want to kill them but, oh well. Just forget I said anything...I'm just crazy...Do not mind me, my almighty Tallest....
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  • From ANON - EscagirlUK on November 19, 2005
    Wow, you are reslly on a role this week. That's, what, 3 chapters in near as many days? And, oh no, the advisor is evil and will try to stop Zim from becoming tallest! He shall lockdown the ship then let it be destructed! Nooo!
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  • From ANON - Switch on November 19, 2005
    oooo Good stuff... I gotta go take care of some little drunk children now (my infinately stupid sister and her friends) thank you for a most welcome and calming distraction. *lurve*
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  • From ANON - InvaderMonkey on November 19, 2005
    uuuuuuuuuuuuuu! lockdown! wow cant belive u pdated 2 chapters so fast!so happy ^^!!!! no dibby? ah well nicely done
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  • From ANON - Krimzon on November 19, 2005
    Lockdown, eh? Now this should be interesting. But oh man, I cna't wait to see Red's reaction to his newfound shortness. OR for that matter, Zim's corination is eagerly looked foward too as well! And three cheers for Kharn cameo goodness! Whee!! And three hugs for you on continuing to impress me with looks into Irken technology and the like!

    *hug*
    *Hug*
    *HUG*
    Alright, I'm gonna go and get some sleep now.

    Much LURVE!
    Krimzon
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