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By : Florville

From nocturne on November 23, 2005
heh. ^^; I'm back already! shocking, ne? unfortunately, I have AD/HD, and it's really hard for me to focus on one fandom at a time, which is why I tend to wander out. hell, the last time I was reading this I got to chapter 50-something and then was like..."shit! I don't feel like reading this anymore! x.x" and left, wandered around for a while, and then came back to finish it.

'cause this fic is so wonderful and all. ^^

btw, I tried out some of the music you mentioned ("line of corpses" and "everything's cool", by wumpscut and pop will eat itself, respectively. heh. I LOVE that last band name ^^), and it's fucking awesome! ^^
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From ANON - one-eyed jester on November 23, 2005
(for some reason this site will not post my entire revie at once. *weep*)

I remember that episode. I have it on dvd (yay) and i was actually watching it a couple days ago. And mimi did have slight personality but it was more like you would expect an AI to be. whereas gir has compassion and sorrow... even if his is on crack... or something like it. hmmm... robot crack, what an interesting concept. lol

Also, i was really intreagued by the charechter development in Dib this last chapter. I mean when he blew up at the science officers for comparing him to his spiecies and later on smiled when Zim promised to anihilate his spiecies. At first it didn't seem to quite fall right now that he had a new people with the Irkens. I mean Dib was always so compassionate and caring to his sister and random humans he was never aquainted with in the sieries. Then i remembered how he was treated and really, if you get ground down that much, a person can be broken beyond repair. It's odd, i should have expected it but i didn't because even though Dib has this deep seended hatred of those who wronged him and can't let it go, he is still dib. He is the exact same person in the sieries only now his compassions are more guarded and redirected. he remebers every hit delt to him. like in the part where he was torturing the vortians. I don't think he would have been capable of torturing the vortians the way he had if it had been an isolated event without the childhood traumas. But those things all make dib the more beautiful because he wasn't destroyed by the events the way some people are, and that's because the sweeter side of him found Zim. I guess i kinda forgot how Dib has changed because the kind Dib was preserved in his interaction *wink wink nudge nudge* with Zim. It's precious. ^.^

on a side note: i don't know why it didn't get posted in my last review, but you know who is so perverted he powns over both Freud and Shakespeare? Pablo Picasso
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From ANON - one-eyed jester on November 23, 2005
OMFG! I have a cameo in your chapter?! *runs around in circles squealing* ooo... who could it be? well, the only new named charechters were grapa, kirm, squeege, tana and jes... and you said it was a him, so is it grapa? But in all honesty i can't really tell you how touched i am. words can not convey the joy. *dramatic pose* I am deeply honored by this; thank you very very much.
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From ANON - Tamagoakura on November 23, 2005
YAY FOR KILLING THE FILTHY EARTH MONKEYS! *Dances.* Teeheehee. I didn't know you was bipolar... Does it suck? O.o ARAGH MY HEAD HURTS! >< Stupid sister forcing me to go places in the cold of night! Don't mind me, I'm just a bit ******off cause I'm getting a HORRIBLE moment of OMFG I can't write because of writers block and I can't do the other story that's blocking the writing on The Day Dib Went Crazy and Stuff because I never saw the episode 'Tak, the Hidious New Gil' so i can't write Taks personality!! >< *Dies.*
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From ANON - Switch on November 23, 2005
it was bad... drunken chilren are NOT something i prefer to deal with on a regualr basis... but if they dont fuck up at least once really badly then they just do it agian and never learn. good chapter BTW that sudden mood change fits Dib so well. i mean its just so human... i love that. great stuff... *huggles* thanks hun
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From ANON - wouldnt-u-like-2-no on November 22, 2005
smite me oh mighty smirtor!
where is the real skooge druing all of this. in the unaird episodes he jioned zim, so where is the little bugger. save him zim! i like skooge! and i really like it when zim and skooge torment dib and tak toghthere! bring on the naive but better then the others Invaders!
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From ANON - wouldnt-u-like-2-no on November 22, 2005
im surprised by how well the irks are taking the fact that not only is a non-breeder former invader now tallest having sex, but he's doing it with a human! as in not an irken. doesn't anyone have a problem with that? like red, or tak, or something?
i mean its been done before im sure, though surprisingly not in a IZ fic, i guess everyone just assumes that as an invader race they've cross breed more then a few times. but anyway i know its really soapy but no ones even mentioned the fact that the tallest has chosen a human for a...mate?
whatever. your fic and you doin' good.
Lee is a character from a anime series on Cartoon network called Naruto, which is the name of the main character. i myself love it and think that Gaara/Lee is afantastic pairing and all who appose shall be flogged until they learn to except love between anime characters even when their not both/ or either of them are bishies. Gaara isn't really a bishi. more like a dark bishi if ya ask me. Neji, Haku, Itachi, they're all bishis. but not Gaara.
Meanwhile back to the review!
U rock.
The fic rocks.
Rock Lee Rocks.
Dib rocks! (still doesn't have a real name)
and Zim rules them all under the power of the control brain whci will hence forth be known as Jhonen.
i dont think ive ever written so much in a review to this story...Oh well! im in pain so im acting weird.
i leave you to your moosy fate!
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From XxSilentNightRainxX on November 22, 2005
Heh.. I like the way this chapter ended!
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From ANON - EscagirlUK on November 22, 2005
Poor, poor, Dibby-wibby. There, there. ::pats on head:: Don't worry, Zim shall smite the human race with his smitefull fist of smitefullnes! They shall be smote as never before smoten! Zim and you shall go down in the Anus of history!
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From ANON - Insanity on November 22, 2005
See me amaze you with my dissapearing and reappering abilities *does weird things with her hands for a few moments before stopping*

Yes...well. At any rate, it was nice to see Zim show some form of compassion towards Purple nearing the process. Of course when you're that loyal to someone your whole life than I guess you can't help but feel some form of remorse. As for Red, the jerk got what was coming to him.

Onto more previous things though. I love how easily Dib shows emotions in this story. He's not one to bottle things up and it definatly shows. The end of the chapter just had me grinning though, because I actually do picture Dib getting some sort of sick and twisted revenge on his own race, and to have Zim say Earth would be the first to go and Dib accept it...just seems right. I always wanted Dib to just tell everyone to fuck off while watching the show...was that just me? No...yes...maybe?

Anyway, I'll try to review more from now on. I've just been doing a ZADR RP with a friend and it has me not focusing on other things. Oh how my mind wanders :)
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From ANON - Sylver on November 22, 2005
I read your reply to DuosAngel's review. I just wanted to add a little note to that. earlier this year, one of my friends did a short course in Psychology, and they had to choose a fictional character and find and identify a personality disorder.

My friend chose dib and apparently Dib was incredibly close to being paranoid-schitzophrenic. sadly I wasn't in the course so I dont know much more than that.

Ununbium? for some reason I was under the impression that it just fell apart, instead of being unstable and going boom or something (that was I percieve when thinking of instability in chemical terms), it just falls apart because of the lack of force required to hold it together. *warily eyes her chem teachers* Good little chemical irkens *pats the irkens*

For the rest of this chapter.. it was good to see more of Dib. ^_^ And that analysis box rocks. I'd love to have one of those. I like the way he got depressed because of the way the science officers asked him if humans were that resourceful (we're really not. so many of us are lazy..). The maleovence he shows towards others is a good thing as well, im finding a lot of dibby sap stories around the place, and ive gotten quite sick of it, its good to read something where he can be sadistic.

thankies for offering to beta Paint It Black for me ^_^ I'll email it to you when I've finished wih it (I really hate the third chap, so i keep tinkering with it, its getting better kind of, just two scenes of hate to go.) you'll probably get it sometime next week. I've got the entire thing planned out, and all ready to be typed out, but I keep writing scenes that fill me with hate. >:(
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From ANON - chatnia on November 22, 2005
Oooh, I can't wait to see what happens once Zim is ordinated and they conquer Earth! That's probably a while away, though. Lovely writing, as always!
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From ANON - InvaderMonkey on November 22, 2005
LOL! poor dib if i was being watched like that for 2 hours while i was talking to myself! i would be sooo embarrassed! lol and i so understand dib to think the irken's thought tha everyone was like dib AHAHAHAHAHA! the human race is to incompetint! nice chapter poor zimmy! i thought the tallest ( red and pur) thru skoodge to the sun? becuase he was so short AND UGLY! no offense to skoodge but that's wut they said! ^^
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From ANON - GothycCoalChambr (not signed in) on November 22, 2005
I'm back to review again, hooray for me. Dib is rather sadistic, isn't he? But he does seem like the type to be like that. So 10 days until they reach Irk, can't wait for that. Um well, I don't really have anything else to say. I'll be patiently waiting for the next chapter my Tallest. *LURVE*
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From ANON - Kharn on November 22, 2005
The time has come... Prepare for the revolution... Long live the Tallest and Florville!
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