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Reviews for Let's Do It Again

By : Doug4422
  • From ANON - Dark Sango on July 04, 2005
    damn..this just keeps getting better and better...i want to read more...plez update...i like it very much...thx...


    Love Always

    Dark Sango(inuyasha)
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  • From ANON - charizardag on July 03, 2005
    FREAKENG HOT MAN! as Quaigmier from family guy would say: GIGGIDY, GIGGIDY, GIGGIDY, GIGGIDY, GIGGIDY!
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  • From ANON - chris on July 03, 2005
    very nice ;). very nice indeed. i like the way you've change the whole feeling behind the story by taking greater time with each girl and giving ron a more mature aura about him. also cudos on the spanish. hey keep this up and you may trun me into a loyal fan.
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  • From ANON - bubbles on July 03, 2005
    Nice use of comic relief at the end there. Keep it up
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  • From ANON - Dark Sango on July 03, 2005
    KEEP IT GOING...UR DOING FINE....I LIKE THE STORY..ITS REALLY GREAT...AND QUITE INTENSE...IN THE WORDS OF RON " DAAAAMMMMNNNNN" LOL....ANYWAY..KEEP IT GOING..ID LOVE TO READ MORE..AND IM ALSO WRITING A STORY..BUT ITS ABOUT INUYASHA...AND HE ALREADY MATED WITH KAGOME..I WROTE THE LEMON OUT OF IT..BUT IF U WANNA READ IT ITS UNDER INUYASHA/KAGOME PART...HAVE FUN....THE NAME OF IT IS "FUTURE LIFE" JUST NOT IN CAPITAL LETTA'S...ANYWAY..EMAIL ME WHEN U UPDATE....THX

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  • From ANON - Cold-Chaos on July 02, 2005
    Man you like all them girls, don't you! Lol Yeah there hot and Ron is a very luck sun of a bitch! Anyway im glad your doing this fic, its pretty cool. Later :)
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  • From ANON - Dark Sango on July 01, 2005
    TALK ABOUT INTENSE....I LIKE IT...I LIKE IT VERY MUCH...I WANNA READ MORE..DAMN..TALK ABOUT LEMON AFTER LEMON...I DONT SEE HOW RON CAN CONTINUE AFTER ATLEAST 2....WOW...WELL HOPING TO READ MORE...CANT WAIT....UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!..AND IF U WANT..U CAN EMAIL
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  • From ANON - Horatius on July 01, 2005
    Thanks for the compliment. You're doing Really well with this story. I've been enjoying every step of the way. I'm looking forward to the rest of the story. 'A Ron sandwich'. heh. If you decide to do a third story in this series, let me know. I'l give you a hand. The Monique chapter flowed pretty well, but the Jessica chapter seemed a little choppy. You could smooth it out a little. The only other suggestion I can offer is that you use more of the senses. Taste and smell are important too. There's also more to sound than what a woman makes with her mouth and lungs. Theres the sound that silks make as you drag them over flesh. Even breasts make sounds. And some of those sounds are the most erotic sounds in the universe.

    Short form: Keep writing, Dammit!!! Keep writing or I'll be forced to conduct a daring daylight commando raid and force you to write more. Since I can't write a decent sex scene, I can only sit in awe of what you have done. Just keep doing it.
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  • From ANON - bubbles on July 01, 2005
    when are you going to post the next chapter
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  • From ANON - RAW19 on July 01, 2005
    Damn! my compliments to the chef, cause this story is cooking! a standing ovation to you, sir!
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  • From ANON - bubbles on June 30, 2005
    pleese hurry up and finish the story, i need to know what he does with kim
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  • From ANON - Anulmentor on June 30, 2005
    oh yea man great work, i hope you will continue your geat work and there will be many more chapters or sequels. i will read them all
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  • From ANON - Horatius on June 30, 2005
    An excellent story. Finish it. You're doing an excellent job. If you don't finish, you're doing a huge disservice to your fans. Your pacing has improved greatly. Your story is an incredible work. All you need to do now is get it on TV. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Eraz on June 29, 2005
    Once again you did it love the chapter can't wait for the next one
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  • From ANON - Racella on June 29, 2005
    YAAAAAYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!
    U UPDATE FAST!!!!!!!!!
    YOU NO STOP WRITEING!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    ME LIKE STORY LOTS!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Racella
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