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By : Spleef
  • From ANON - Valkyrie on June 13, 2005
    Very good so far! Doode, the mark thing was cool and thank you for making him sweet towards her! Even if he is still a bastard. ^.^ Hee! I love Sokka! That was classic. Keep writing por favor!
    ~Valkyrie
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  • From ANON - Rainne on June 13, 2005
    I read Cold Water and enjoyed it a lot, I'm glad you were so forthcoming with the sequel. I think my favorite bit in both stories is how well you capture the softer side of Zuko and how he is with Katara. It feels like you really get through all the layers of both characters and they connect beautifully. I have to say though, not that I don't love the wonderfully paternal Iroh, but the dialogue for chapter three felt a little awkward. You might want to read it out loud before you upload it, to see if it sounds right to you. As for your challenge, I would love to see an Aang/Katara fic by you. I haven't found a single one so far anywhere, and I'm sure you'd do an awesome job.
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  • From ANON - Politely on June 13, 2005
    Woah, This story is so good. The plot is brilliant and I love how Zuko has that soft spot. Very good. You made Zuko seem very old, but he's well educated so I'll let that slip n.n; Keep going.
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  • From ANON - Kali on June 12, 2005
    it REALLY bugs me how you made Zuko's room sound like a hotel suite since in the second episode i only saw his room to be four metal walls and some banners...uuh, i think there was a desk.... and a matress.... but hey whatever works.
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  • From ANON - BD on June 12, 2005
    eh heh heh.. yea. i only commented on spelling and grammer and such because i'm hoping to be an author someday ^^''' DON'T HUNT ME DOWN AND KILL ME PLEASE!!!! still luv the story
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  • From ANON - BD on June 12, 2005
    Hey, you have alot of spelling errors and a few lines that don't make sense, like one time you made it seem like Zuko was suddenly a girl cause you put "hers" instead of his. but other than that I LOVE IT!!!! my friend DF will kill me if she figures out i said that, she is soooo against Katara and Zuko keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - SIN-chic on June 11, 2005
    that was sooooo good....wheres the next chapter* looks around* nooo you must update.
    adding to my favorites. I like where this is going.hehehehe lol
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  • From ANON - Inusextoy on June 11, 2005
    ha! very well written! I can't wait for more, so update soon and make it another long chapter again ^.^
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  • From ANON - Zeek on June 11, 2005
    that was..............................awesome. I am just loving this story more and more. please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Chibionna on June 11, 2005
    Very good fic. I liked the Cold Fire. This is better. Zuko is a jerk for burning her. I really don't understand how a guy can claim that he loves a woman so much but then turn right around and abuse her. Anyways, I like your writing style. I wonder what Sokka and Aang's reactions are gonna be. That will be entertaining. This is a good fic, but one thing that was bugging me through out reading chapter 2 is that Katara sighs too much. It really gets rather bothersome. All in all, I'll continue reading this fic because it is interesting. Keep up the good work.
    ~Chibi
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  • From ANON - P.C. on June 10, 2005
    Woah, such an awesome chapter! I love how they both hate each other but love each other at the same time! I can't wait till the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - KinkoOo on June 10, 2005
    Have i ever told you, that you are a very talented writter. well thank you for this chapter iv been waiting for it for awhile...well actally not that long..but still. Ne-ways that was a good chapter. About the 'challenge': I want you 2 write a lemon on Zuko/Katara/Jet or Haru because if you wrote a lemon based on them you would write one hell of a fucking fic worth reading. Plus i have never actally seen or read a fic(any fic from fanfiction.net) in this whole damn site having threesomes. You are very talented in writing and you are THE first Author i have ever asked to write a HOT lemon fic that i actally looked forward to reading. well i hope that tells you how bad im looking forward to reading your Soon-2-be-fic.
    -kinko
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  • From ANON - Chad on June 09, 2005
    Nice chapter again Spleef ^^ There were quite a few parts I found interesting, like the aloe plants being important to the fire nation and such. Keep up the good work for this very good story Spleef :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 09, 2005
    absolutly fucking brilliant as always spleef.
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  • From ANON - Valkyrie on June 08, 2005
    I have to say that at the beginning I was hoping that the A-gang would make it to the Earth Nation city and Katara would run into Haru and be smitten with him only to be found by a jealous Zuko but, oh well. Pretty good so far but make him love her, please? I loved it when Zuko was somewhat sweet to her but still his rogue-ish bastardly self. Keep going! Update or I shall die of boredom. Please. ^,^
    ~Valkyrie
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