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Reviews for Hot Water

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  • From RogueRikku on September 20, 2007
    That was very interesting. I'm always up for a good Zutara fic. ^-^
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  • From ANON - SL on June 10, 2007
    Zuko's mark is certainly more tasteful than getting "Property of Katara" tattooed on his balls. Excuse me, that was crude >_< sorry. This chapter is very sweet, I like that he offers her a new necklace (I wonder if he knows about that particualr Water Tribe custom...).
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  • From ANON - Kaoreii on June 05, 2007
    Actually, the name Kiana is hawaiian. I think it means 'moon goddess' or the like. Or 'divine, heavenly'. Depending on what source you use.

    Anyway, the story was OMG wonderful. i enjoyed it, very much.
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  • From ANON - Jhondie on May 05, 2007
    The edit of Hot Water shines, just like the edit of Cold Fire. I remember how this story was before, and the changes you made make this even better.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 29, 2007
    I've not finished it yet, but so far the revision looks GREAT.
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  • From ANON - Jasmin Kaiba on January 31, 2007
    Goodness,this is WONDERFUL story!I love it, I adore it!I love this last chapter and this part the most:

    "Wasn't that fun?"Katara asked with a breathy whisper.
    "I refuse to answer that."Zuko shot back and she blew a raspberry.

    I craked up laughing.Just imaginaging Zuko's face as he said that and then Katara's blows him a raspberry!
    Simply great!
    Jasmin
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  • From ANON - J on January 08, 2007
    It got a little PWP toward the end. And a couple of the chapters after the Agni Kai had a rather filler-ish quality to them.

    You cut back significantly on the ellipses though, which is definitely a good thing. And I'm a fan of manipulating capitalisation to emphasise words.

    Also liked the attempt to incorporation cultural setting. Nice work, especially seeing we knew very little about the Fire Nation when you started this.

    Overall a good story. A decent plot, a little repetitive in places but thankyou Agni there were no Mary-Sues!
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  • From ANON - anne on December 19, 2006
    Nice touch "...the Great War is over" awsome!
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  • From ANON - Inuchic15 on November 23, 2006
    Kasumi is the bounty hunter June
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  • From ANON - Help on November 03, 2006
    Would it be possible to fix the formatting of the first five chapters? I want to read the sequel, but the first couple chapters are just a jumble of words with no paragraph breaks. Couldn't you upload them again?
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  • From ANON - ZC on October 23, 2006
    You're the best Zutara author out there.
    Happy now? Just keep Writing.
    Thanks.
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  • From ANON - ZC on October 22, 2006
    Breathtaking.
    Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Joshua Jehanna on August 21, 2006
    Cool.... Funny.... All around goodness.... Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Suki (aka shi sendo) on August 12, 2006
    omg! loved it! i've been staying up for the past five days reading this (ok start reading around six n stay up till 3 am) its so great! i loved this and i hope you make more soon!!! and i'm so happy there are authors out there who know what their doing!!! keep up the good work and i hope your fix is sated ^.^
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 31, 2006
    Hey! I'd love to be able to read this, but it looks like all your formatting got stripped out of the first six chapters - they're all one big block of text with no line breaks.
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