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By : Spleef
  • From ANON - Aaml4Ever on July 10, 2005
    I would just like to say that this has been one of the greatest fanfics that I have ever read. The story is so amazing that I actually breeze past the sex scenes just to get to what will happen next , of caurs I always return to read them later because of the great imagery used. Keep up the great work! -Your loyal and honorable fan

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  • From ANON - lisa on July 09, 2005
    arrg! Cliffhangers suck!! update soon PLEASE!
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  • From ANON - Dark Sango on July 08, 2005
    come on geez..update as soon as possible...plez...i wanna read more...damn that was interesting....errrr...PLEZ UPDATE SOON!!!!
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  • From ANON - Shiora on July 08, 2005
    T.T Nuuu! Katara! *sobs*
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  • From ANON - Jaxomruth on July 08, 2005
    This is a great chapter. I really like Zuko as a character. I think he is very interesting. He is not really a villian like the Fire Lord, but rather he is an opposing force to the Avatar. He bares no anger at Aang, he just wishes to restore his honor. I hope someday when this series wraps up (a long time in the future) that they find a way to make peace with Zuko and Iroh. I believe that Zuko would be a much better Fire Lord than this father. He cares about his people unlike his father who only cares about himself. I love to see Zuko as the ally of the Aang and the others. I think that Iroh would be the perfect one to teach Aang firebending.

    Your story is really good. I hope that you post another chapter. I am going on a vacation in a little over a week and will not have internet access. I please post before then. I want to see what happens next. I could picture the Fire Lord putting a bounty on his son and brother but I don't think he would want to kill the Avatar because if Aang dies then they have to start the search all over again because he will just be reborn. It would make more sense to capture the Avatar alive. I read you other story about Aang and Katara. It was well written and really steamy (yum!) but I don't those two will end up together in the end. They act more like siblings than anything else. I think they are just too close to anything. There is no passion between. In the short scene between Zuko and Katara in epsiode with the pirates there was some sparks flying between the two. I saw it.
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  • From ANON - Chad on July 07, 2005
    Nice chapter Spleef! ^^ The plot in this one was very in depth and interesting, especially the ending. :) I can't wait to see what happens next ^^
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  • From ANON - ShawdiABalla on July 07, 2005
    omg this was so good please continue please
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  • From ANON - Kai on July 07, 2005
    *sniff* NOOOO!!!! She can't die!!!! She's my favorite character!!!!
    She has a point tho', Zuko does seem to use her.....
    Anyway, keep up the great work, girl!!!
    Love ya!!
    Kai
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  • From ANON - renusuru on July 03, 2005
    this chapter was very well writen i give you two thumbs up and a five rating




    and for the dare...........uuuuhhh hum how bout oh i got it

    okay zuko has liked katara since he first laid eyes on her and
    he is looking for the avitar scouting a forest and bacicly walks in on her and jet going at it
    and he gets pissed bbbbbbbzzzzzzzzzzz and thats the sound of my brain going dead
    well any ways it end's up ina threesome


    sorry thats the best i can come up with keep up with story its grate (:
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  • From ANON - Ozai on July 02, 2005
    What, the Fire lord would do that to his own son? And brother? That is so wicked...but great story!
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  • From ANON - Chad on July 01, 2005
    Cool chapter ^^ I'm in suspense for the next one... Keep up the great work ^^
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  • From ANON - Moonwolf on July 01, 2005
    Toataly cool
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 30, 2005
    This is not something I expected from Osai. But it shows a lot of promise for a good story...
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  • From ANON - P.C. on June 30, 2005
    Another great chapter. The sex was a little too rough for my taste, but it was still good.
    Update soon^^
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 29, 2005
    'Say my name, bitch'...I loved that line. Hot sex scene too
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