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Reviews for Hot Water

By : Spleef
  • From ANON - Kitsune on July 21, 2005
    hmmmmm.... I like the memories of Kitar better than The Shi Ryuu.
    Do you speak japaneese or just look up words every now and then?
    Shi ryuu is a stupid character in my opinion but he does seem like an
    interesting person in Zuko's memories. I really like the story line alot
    and the Prince OOC scenes are don skillfully enough so that is dosent
    seem really that out of palce. you are doing a great jo w/ this story
    please continue.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 21, 2005
    Wow...that was good
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  • From ANON - Chad on July 20, 2005
    Nice chapter yet again Spleef ^^ Hehe I liked the part where Kitara made a dragon out of water, it was cool; Another nicely done chapter to the story ^^
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  • From ANON - WindChild on July 18, 2005
    I really love your story. You have a great grasp of character developement and plot evolution. There is one critic I must make though is the use of diction. While in today's society cuse words such as the ones you use are common in a more samurai society would not understand the concepts of the words, just wondering if you used a more modern word usage to make it easier for readers to connect to the characters? I also really like Zuko's cousin though his dialect is suited to the era it is more a common street tounge. If he grew up in the royal family he would have more of a Noble dialect. I was wondering if he has a lower dialect because he was raised as lower class? I really am a huge fan of your stories though and hope you update soon. You tie everything into each other so well every thing seems to have a part in the value of the whole.
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  • From ANON - yakusokuu on July 17, 2005
    i think that yu should make a Katara/kuzo (sp-?) /Haru threesome! Why-? um... becasue Haru did show interest in her and i
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  • From ANON - Yakusokuu on July 17, 2005
    i think that yu should make a Katara/kuzo (sp-?) /Haru threesome! Why-? um... becasue Haru did show interest in her and i
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  • From ANON - P.C. on July 16, 2005
    The last two chapters were great! It was so sad when Katara got hurt, but I'm glad she's doing better^^ That dream that Zuko had was creepy though>< I liked the part where Katara and Iroh went shopping togetjer. It was cute!
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 15, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Chad on July 14, 2005
    Excellent chapter Spleef! It had touching moments and sad ones, and overall it was a very good chapter. ^^ Keep up the nice work :)
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  • From ANON - Tygerlily [not signed in] on July 14, 2005
    Oh goodness I've been terrible about reviewing until now and for that I apologize.

    However, you have me really distressed with the ending of this last chapter. I've been hoping that somehow/someway Zuko and Katara work together to bring down his father so that Zuko can reclaim his throne and the Aang and her brother could basically go free or something close to that. Was that really Katara's mother coming to warn Zuko, I sincerley hope that she's wrong. Well, you certainly have my attention and I cannot wait until the next chapter. I will say that this is one of my favorite fictions at the moment and one of the best if not the best Avatar fiction out there - but that's just my opinion anyway :P

    Again, hope to see more very soon ^_^
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  • From ANON - ShawdiABalla on July 13, 2005
    poor Katara it was good please continue
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  • From ANON - Stealth on July 11, 2005
    I do hope Katara will live and things between her and Zuko will be a little better. Please make sure Katara will be okay, I really don't want her to die. I hope your next chapter will be a little happier.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 11, 2005
    omg i hope you update soon...i'm about to pee myself
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  • From ANON - ML& on July 10, 2005
    I do hope Katara will be okay. I hope she'll live and everything will be okay between her and Zuko. I also do hope Aang and the gang will get away safely.
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  • From ANON - Cassidy on July 10, 2005
    o.o
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