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By : Spleef
  • From ANON - Chad on August 10, 2005
    Nice chapter Spleef ^^ The singing part was sweet hehe and I can't wait to see what happens next ^^
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  • From whirleeq on August 10, 2005
    Aww... sweet chappie... it's giving me the warm fuzzies :). I'm glad that you don't write Zuko as complete and total bastard. He's not evil, you know... just a bit short sighted. He hopes to return to a status quo that can never be again. I Can't wait for season II to start in January when the introduce his sister, Princess Zula (she was shown in a teaser in 'The Storm' standing next to Zhao.). She apparantly is just like her father! Anyway, great chappie, keep it up the good work... and yes, the song's a bit morbid; kind of reminded me of 'Ring around the Rosy'. :)

    Oh, btw, if you're interested, here's a synopsis on season two: http://www.asmzine.com/features/conventions/sdcc05/sdcc05_avatar_report.html
    And a WHOLE lot of beautiful story panels (make sure you click on the arrows, there are several pages of pictures!), including pictures of what I assume will be Zuko's love interest, Zuko's sister, and the northern water city (it's MASSIVE): http://www.asmzine.com/features/conventions/sdcc05/gallery/sdcc05-avatar-panel/


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  • From ANON - Anon on August 10, 2005
    Dock, by definition, means to stop the boat at a port to disembark onto the land. The floors of a sailing ship (or any kind of multi-level ship, really), are *Decks*. Heading down to lower decks is usually referred to as "Going below decks." The rear part of the ship is called the Stern, the top deck area the "Poop Deck"(No, I don't know why, it just *is*, okay?). And the forward-most part is the Bow. The left side is the Port side, and the right the Starboard. Are we all clear on our nautical terminology now? Good! You may continue.(Both my folks are ex-navy, okay?)
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  • From ANON - Mica on August 09, 2005
    Pwee! A new Chapter so soon!
    I dance with joy!

    It has a lovely mod!

    I can tell that it's going to have to turn out kind of like the water spirit episode in order for Zuko to get out of this. Aang and Soka are going to have to escape from the Firelord, not Zuko. then Ozai's a public idiot, and Zuko gets to smirk evilly.

    He's a good smirker.

    Pweese write more! I hunger for your writings as you hunger for reviews!

    *does the 'I'm probably the first to review this chapter' dance*
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on August 09, 2005
    That was a cool chapter. I do hope that they'll work something out. I also do hope that everyone will be all right in your story. Good luck with chapter 13 and I'll keep an eye out for this chapter in "fanfiction.net". See you there!!!!
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  • From ANON - kayko15 on August 09, 2005
    Food!
    Zuko: She meant a mental type of food just like your reviews for running from fear itself.
    Me: She still said food.
    Zuko: Just review...
    Me: Okay anyway. Great chapter. Zuko is such a hopeless romantic sometimes.
    Zuko: Yeah I know but people still love and write about me.
    Me: See what I mean? *points to Zuko*
    Zuko: What's that suppose to mean?
    Me: Nothing anyway. I'm glad Zuko has his moments. It's good that someone that his life loves a girl once in a while. So yeah. Update soon. And I'll be happy.
    Zuko: What about me?
    Me: And Zuko too he'll be happy. Later. K15
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  • From ANON - Mica on August 08, 2005
    This is absolutly fantastic! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - ivorycoral on August 07, 2005
    *GLOMPS THE AUTHOR* Whaooo! You updated! I totally love the way you write. Believe it or ot you've become something of an inspiration for me as a writer. Keep going with this story, I wanna see how this turns out
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 06, 2005
    best zuko/katara smut ever. hope u put in mroe smut soon, im starved
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  • From ANON - Cassie on August 05, 2005
    That was amazing i must say i am a big fan of yours your stories are so detailed and sound so real as if i was reading the avatar series themselves. And the first story Cold Fire really sounded real for a minute there while i was watching the episode where Katara finds the water scroll and gets kidnapped by the pirates i really did think that Zukko took katara to his ship and that he really did take her maidenhood from her that night. If only though. I can't wait for the next chapters to come out hope they are as good as the first eleven.
    ou can e-mail me if you ever want to talk more about the series or any other anime.
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  • From ANON - morwen_re on August 04, 2005
    good! good! i really, really, really like your style and this story! please, please update again soon!
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  • From ANON - echelon180 on August 02, 2005
    really great story. i love how katara and zuko slowly develop their relationship with each other. awesome story! one of the best i've read so far.
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  • From ANON - Starflite on August 02, 2005
    Egad, you're really the best in the business!! Perfect plotline, great organization. About how many chapters are you planning on going with this? I wish it would go on forever! Keep up the good work! :D
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on August 01, 2005
    I do hope you put Chapter 11 with the rest at "fanfic.net". I hope you haven't forgotten your fans there. They're counting on you; please respond to this and put Chapter 11 with the rest of your story there. You did promised us that after you write here. You said you will post here, then go to the other site and put it there with a few modifications. Please don't forget your fans on "fanfic.net", just do this for me and your fans there and put Ch.11 with the rest of your story there. PLEASE I BEG OF YOU!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on August 01, 2005
    This chapter 11 is pretty cool. I do hope you post this one on fanfic.net real soon with the rest of the story there. It will mean a lot for your fans there especially the ones who are under age. It's very decent and it's good enough to be there. I hope I'll see it there real soon. Keep up the good work and tone it down with the bad words and other things though.
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