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Reviews for Hot Water

By : Spleef
  • From ANON - Anon on October 18, 2005
    Whoosh! That was a mouthful! I think you could have broken it down into two seperate chapters, or more! Lord know, it takes forver to read. And, oh, dear, could the birth control herbs have failed? :o Oopsie! Oh, well, that's life for you. Now, if Katara can just get her appetite back and her weight back up to normal. I await the next chapter! Laters.
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on October 18, 2005
    Hi there, this chapter was pretty interesting. I do hope that there will be peace between the nations real soon. I also do hope that Katara will see Aang, Sokka, and the rest of the people she knew and love again. That and that she and Zuko will work things out. Nice to see you again and keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Scarylady on October 17, 2005
    WHEEEEEEE!!!!! Chapter 21 was soooooooo cute! It made me so happy! Keep on writing! ^-^
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  • From ANON - Chad on October 17, 2005
    This was a really nice chapter Spleef ^^ It's amazing how you put so many details into just one chapter... It was very good and I can't wait to see more. ^^
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  • From ANON - btrfli on October 17, 2005
    For Chapter 7 and the lemon thing, i don't know if you know or not, but that's called 69-ing. or something like that.
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  • From ANON - Mica on October 17, 2005
    *loves mention of self*

    Woo! I luffs the fluffy bits almost as much s the angsty bits!
    ...this chapter has lots of both, so obviously I enjoyed it.

    The Zuko-as-firelord took me a couple of seconds to wrap my head around, but it was lots of fun to think about after that.

    Your faithful Reviewer,
    Mica
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  • From ANON - Fyiarah on October 16, 2005
    I must say that I LOVE your story! It's very true about Zuko's situation with Ozai, and what probably would happen if daddy found out his son was sqrewing a water tribe girl. Lol, that sounded weird.
    Zula haters unite! I also must say that I hate her. My character, whose name I am using, is Zuko's sister. It steams me up really bad that they had that happen!
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  • From ANON - FANGURL309 on October 16, 2005
    I LOVE THIS STORY. I THINK YOU SHOULD MAKE A FANART FROM THAT ONE CHAPTER WHEN KATARAS WEARING THAT MAKEUP AND I SAW THAT ONE FANART WITH ZULA AND KATARA, YOU SHOULD MAKE A JUN AND KATARA FANART. AND ZUKO COULD BE IN THE BACKGROUND AND JUN'S TELLING HIM THAT KATARAS TO PRETTY FOR HIM. THAT WOULD BE SO COOL.
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  • From ANON - WarriorAtHeart on October 16, 2005
    *cheers* Great job at the ending! Keep up the awesome work!
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  • From ANON - Gauri92 on October 16, 2005
    oh, tht was good. zuko finally admits his love for Katara. Does this fic continue or is an epilogue to som things up the oly thing left?
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  • From ANON - Laura on October 16, 2005
    Wonderful job! Surely you can't be done with the story yet! I hope you keep it going. This is the best Avatar fanfic I've read (and believe me when I say, I've read a lot!) Keep up the fabulous work!
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  • From ANON - Katuko on October 16, 2005
    B E A U Tiful ending for this chapter. I couldn't have expected a better turnout. Very...well, it summarized the entire story really really well until this point. Is it going on? I'd like that, to see how everything goes on^^ please don't stop writing!
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  • From ANON - Zukoscute2 on October 16, 2005
    so pretty. i luved this chapter. is the story over? i hope it isn't. continue the good work.
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  • From ANON - fightingdreamer5 on October 16, 2005
    Yah! I was mentioned! It was so good! I'm happy Kataras back, but Zuko still sounds alittle posesive. Oh well. I loved it alot. I hope that wasn't the last chapter
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  • From ANON - Nyanko on October 15, 2005
    I enjoy your stories a lot. Don't get me wrong they are wonderful, but you still forgot to put a disclaimer. I like your stories therefore i do not wish for them to be cut from this site of any other. Continue your great work. I will make a better review for your epic tale later.

    Love
    -Nyanko
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