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Reviews for Hot Water

By : Spleef
  • From ANON - Zukoscute2 on October 22, 2005
    i luved it, keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - SleepingDragon13 on October 22, 2005
    OMG!

    Me: IS KATARA...No I should not ruin the surprise for myself...

    Inner child: Too bad cause the other half of u doesn't care!
    Me: Yes tell us please!
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  • From ANON - Arwey on October 22, 2005
    ...totally rocks!
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  • From ANON - fighting_dreamer4 on October 22, 2005
    *GASP* Is Katara...Pregnet (spelling?) Oh no! Once again, an AWSOME chapter! Gone to read more...
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  • From ANON - Chelsea on October 22, 2005
    Aww... That was so sweet! Great Story!
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  • From ANON - ditz4lyf on October 22, 2005
    yay! there bak togethor
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  • From ANON - Hoodine on October 20, 2005
    OMG this story makes me extremly happy, you should write more about zuko and katara together
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  • From ANON - Starmay on October 19, 2005
    it was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good! I luved it
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  • From ANON - A Karswyll on October 19, 2005
    I’ve just spent the afternoon reading your story and as always your work has been a pleasure to read. One thing that I’ve always enjoyed about your work is that your plots aren’t pointless and have a well developed, mature tone to them. The story actually progresses and the characters grow as well as having the desired ‘romantic’ interlude among the main pair.

    Onto some minor criticism. I’ve noticed that you’ve always spelt ‘eachother’ as one word and as I’m pretty certain you know that one actually spells them as two words, ‘each’ and ‘other’, could you get the problem fixed so it doesn’t occur anymore? Another mishap that you make is occasionally forgetting to capitalise the beginning of a sentence when someone is speaking. Run on sentences have already been addressed by another reviewer so this is just a reminder to watch out for them.

    Onto more positive things. I do understand that Katara and Zuko are the main characters; however could you at sometime revisit other characters, such as Sokka and Aang for a brief time for us readers? To learn about what their mindset is right now as well has how they’re doing? After all, the two boys have experienced quite a personal trauma, as well as everyone being affected by the political upheavals currently occurring.

    And what’s this about Katara’s cycle being late? Makes one wonder… and smile.

    Until the next chapter, may your muse continue to torment you. (It does such nice things for us readers.)

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  • From ANON - Katuko ( fanfiction ) on October 19, 2005
    WALA!!!! and BAM. Just like that. BRILLIANT writing, not my level, but you really have a good style. I like your vocabulary, and it's like you selected each word for a purpose. It's like an all you can eat buffet of Zutara, put together into one yummy piece. mmmmmmmmmmm XD you have been BLESSED! so pray continue forever and ever and ever in your writing^^
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  • From ANON - Suki-chan on October 19, 2005
    Oh, I forgot to say that I think it would be nice to see fanart of when Zuko was talking to Agni during the "Agni Kai".....Or, when Katara came back and was standing behind Zuko after Iroh left. The "after math" chapter. Or a picture of Katara when she first tried on Zuko's robes. =^.^= All right. I'm done........>> HURRAY! *Runs off to hide in the mashmellow pool* Laterz!
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  • From ANON - Suki-chan on October 19, 2005
    Spleef you rok! ^.^ You rok hard! Hehe, I can't get enough of reading this story. If I was Katara, I would be scared too and be ready to run away. But yeah, Zuko is one determined person. ^.~ That's what makes him so great and I think the scar is sexy too. xD >> Now, I wonder if, maybe, just possibly that "Tara" could actually be with child....Hm.....o.o Katara and Zuko would be young parents....Not that they couldn't handle it....But whoa. xD And I am so proud of Zuko! Yay! Zuko has ended the war....In a sense...>> well, at least we know he does't want it to continue any longer....Now, I have one more thought. I wonder what Aang and Katara's brother might think of the whole situation or would they make an attempt to save Katara? Hm....So many questions.....=D Any-hoo, can't wait until the next chapter(s) YOU MUST HURRY OH GREAT SPLEEFY! *Bows*
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  • From ANON - Mica on October 18, 2005
    Huzzah! The plot continues and actually makes some kind of sense!
    *dances*

    Still don't knw what happened to that dragon-face guy...and Aang...we need something about him and Sokka...no way Sokka'd just give up on saving Katara like that. He's too stubborn of an idiot. I think it'd be funny for him to walk it acting all heroic, only to be treated like some "honorable brother-of-the-queen" The look on his face would be priceless...

    As always this chapter is og wonderful length and glorious quality!

    Keep up the magnificent work, Spleef!

    Your Faithful Rviewer,
    Mica
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  • From ANON - whrileeq on October 18, 2005
    Hot damn!

    Excellent chapter... you handled Katara's thoughts and emotions very, very well. All of that and before noon too ;).

    Are you making Katara preggers? If so... well, weight loss and stress is awfully difficult on a first trimester pregnancy; not to mention at 14/15, with her body not yet fully developed, childbirth would be... difficult.

    Loved the bedroom talk between the two... very, very hot. And your lemon writing is getting better and better each time!

    u rock teh house, babe

    :)
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  • From ANON - Kai on October 18, 2005
    Oh...does she even love him back? I wonder if she could be pregnant. Those herbs can only do so much. *laughs* Well, anyways, enough rambling. I'm very pleased to read abother chapter of you work. I hope to see more soon! Keep up the great work!
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