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Reviews for Hot Water

By : Spleef
  • From ANON - Shadow Stealer on October 28, 2005
    Stupid dreams, almost screwed everything up.
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  • From ANON - Chad on October 28, 2005
    Awesome chapter Spleef ^^ The part with the dream battle and the evil spirit was really cool hehe I can't wait to see more ^^
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  • From ANON - Laura on October 28, 2005
    Again, I am so loving this story! I can't wait to read the sequel to it. I finally read Cold Water, and now a lot of things make sense to me. You are such a talented writer! I only wish you the best and keep up the creative writing. I also must add, that I'm glad that Katara's mother passed on to the other side. I was almost kinda getting worried about that! LOL Good luck with the next chapters!!!
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  • From AloofandAndrogynous on October 28, 2005
    Bloody hell, good stuff
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  • From ANON - Scarylady on October 27, 2005
    Yay! New chapter! >does a happy dance< I check every day just to see if a new chapter has been posted! (Yeah, I'm a dork, I know.) This chapter was kinda creepy, definitly gettin' in the Halloween mood. ^-^ Zuko...overpossesive much? But considering the lack of familial affection he's recieved I can understand how he'd be all "MINE!" with someone he loved. However the thing that those demon things are sent by the gods does not bode well. I hope this has a happy ending, I just read RedNovember's "The Hunter and the Prey" and it made me cry ('cuz I'm a sap). This new chapter made my day! Thanks! ^-^
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  • From ANON - Thomas on October 27, 2005
    A lovely, tense chapter, which I enjoyed reading just as much as the previous ones. You're one of the few writers who can pull out a sex scene as part of the story, and have a legitimate plot to fit it.

    And you got my hopes up for some possible bondage in later chapters, so I have more incentive for reading, even if it doesn't come true.

    All in all, Teh pwnzords.

    I apologize for that.

    -Thomas
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on October 27, 2005
    Hi there, this chapter was pretty cool. It was also very deep when you combine both the dream & spirit worlds together. That was pretty neat. I'm glad Katara feels better and things are working out between her and Zuko. Good luck with the rest of the chapters of the story and your sequel for this. I'll look forward to it with open arms. See you soon. Good luck with chapter 23, post it real soon.
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  • From ANON - Amber on October 27, 2005
    I am sorry to say but you can't use "The Deserter" in your story because that was episode 16 and "The Fortuneteller" was 14, we have missed an episode. Don't worry I missed it too. The key thing about episode 15, "Bato of the Water Tribe", is that Aang was able to get Katara's necklace back from Zoko. That would so miss your lovely story up. You can read about it at www.tv.com Also you can see sceen caps at www.firebender.com
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  • From ANON - Thomas on October 26, 2005
    Brilliant piece of work. Absolutely brilliant. I won’t go on with praises for too long, but it was the best read I've had in a long time. Thanks for it.

    On a more personal note however, you got my hopes up with talk of 'punishing' Katara. Not to influence what you write, but it would be nice to see some in depth bondage somewhere in here.

    That aside, it was quite well written, and regardless of where you go with it, I'll keep reading, and enjoying.

    -Thomas
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  • From ANON - Nell Nell on October 26, 2005
    I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Pleases Write More Soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - dark_water on October 25, 2005
    great chapter!! i can't wait for more...but i REALLY hope that Katara isn't pregnant. not to be mean but that would ruin things. i'm still looking forward to knowing where Aang and Sokka are. Keep up the work
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  • From ANON - Fyiarah on October 24, 2005
    Oh my gosh! This was so incrediably touching! *sniff sniff* So awsome, it portrays human insticts, and emotions. And best of all, love conflicts! High five sister!
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  • From ANON - Nu on October 24, 2005
    shit...this is a good story! how do you write so fucking good?
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 22, 2005
    The part where Zuko was eating out Katara...that was so hawt.
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  • From ANON - Gauri92 on October 22, 2005
    really good. hm...katara pregnant? have 2 wait i guess.
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