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Reviews for Hot Water

By : Spleef
  • From ANON - hola on November 18, 2005
    they cut off my review...
    ...paul right now...poor twins semi lost both parents...but sci-fi made them pretty hot :D okay i gotta go finish reading..i stopped to review. great story!!
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  • From ANON - hola on November 18, 2005
    "fear is the mind killer" heheheeh dune!!! im getting a mental image of chaney (sp?) and paul (right? i cant remember >
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on November 18, 2005
    Hi there, I do hope you update real soon. I'm dying to know what happens next. Please post chapter 25 real soon, the suspense is killing me!!!! I can hardly wait to see what they'll do next. Hope to see you real soon.
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  • From ANON - A Karswyll on November 17, 2005
    What it is with you and compounding ‘each other’? It’s consistent enough that I have to assume it’s intentional, but incorrect in any case. That’s all with the criticism though for this review, onto your dosage to appease your review addiction.

    I enjoyed that the relationship between Zuko and Katara came to the forefront once again, that’s not saying I didn’t enjoy the Angi Kai related chapters, but that the relationship is evolving as the characters are.

    Chapter 22 with the dream sequence was a rather unique way of addressing the fears that they have concerning their relationship. The world of the Four Element Nations is a rather spiritual one and you’ve not only remembered that, but included it rather well I think, in having Agni speak with Zuko, and then as I’ve mentioned, the dream demon assuming the form of Katara’s mother and feeding off of Katara and Zuko’s insecurities.

    Chapter 24 I know was good in general for the reason that it wasn’t until I was completed reading it, that I realised how much you’d written. And that’s the sign of a good writer or even a good movie, you don’t notice the amount of time spent reading or watching it.

    Keep up the good work and I’m looking to only to the completion of “Hot Water” but the story lines that you’ve mentioned and already described in general terms will follow. Until the next time, hope you don’t go into withdrawal and remain severely drugged by reviews.

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  • From ANON - tab-sempai on November 16, 2005
    hey spleef, I have been reading your story for a while now and I wanted to review when I caught up to you. Finally i have. I love this story!! Its addicting cant wait for the next chapter. Update soon, I don't want to have withdrawal syndrome or something.

    Love,

    tab-sempai
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  • From ANON - starmay on November 15, 2005
    I like how u captured Katara's simplenessand how Katara is more comfortable with Hana. I think that it's disgusting with that noble guy that's really old....ew!
    Oh, are Sokka and Aang going to reappear anywhere befre the end of Hot Water?
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  • From ANON - Scarylady on November 14, 2005
    Yay for the new chapter! I'm kinda surprised that none of the courtiers commented on Katara's outfit (thinking that she has delusions of grandure or something for wearing the gown of the previous consort), but then they may have noticed and it may be an issue later (only the great and almighty Spleef Knows >bows to your gratness
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  • From ANON - Chad on November 14, 2005
    Very nice chapter! ^^ I wonder what's gonna happen in the next one... Hehe
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  • From ANON - Arwey on November 14, 2005
    Hmmm....Poor Kat, I feel so bad for her. But at least she now has female company! And I wonder, how will the rest of the party go?
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on November 14, 2005
    Hi there, this chapter was pretty cool. The coronation thing was pretty neat, although the girl with that creepy old head advisor was a little too much. I do hope that Zuko would get around in those he has for the Fire Nation real soon, I think what he has planned sounds pretty interesting. Anyway good luck with chapter 25, I hope I see it real soon like Friday or so. I hope I'm not rushing you, I'm just anxious to see how this turns out. See you later!!!!
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  • From ANON - Selina on November 13, 2005
    WooHo!! GO SPLEEF! I Still really like the fic but
    if katara is pregnant is it going to be a girl, boy ,
    or TWINS?! UPDATE SOON
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  • From ANON - chickygurl on November 13, 2005
    Your fic, it's so mature...so out there. I love it.

    I love the possessiveness of Zuko towards Katara. Very realistic. Well, I'll be waiting for the next chapter.

    You're very creative.

    Take care!
    chickygurl
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  • From ANON - chickygurl on November 13, 2005
    Hmm, Katara might've been having a mental breakdown or perhaps she's pregnant. Hmm...lemme ponder this.

    I tink she's pregnant. It would be like you to make more problems for Katara and Zuko...

    If that just sounded like an insult, it's not.

    It just meas the story gets more exciting. Hurray!

    Take care!
    chickygurl
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  • From ANON - janelle on November 13, 2005
    Is Katara pregant? I think she is. Anyway please update soon and hurry! ^_^
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  • From ANON - SleepingDragon13 on November 13, 2005
    Uh oh!

    I bet Katara got pregnant on the ship...in chapter 10

    Inner child: EW!
    Me: Shit wtf is a child doing here! Shield your eyes!
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