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Reviews for Hot Water

By : Spleef
  • From ANON - Fyiarah on November 23, 2005
    Wow. Just....wow. I've never thought about the religion of the nations before. Appearently you have.
    I see nothing wrong with this. At all. It's a wonderful peice of work, all of your Avatar stories are. *sniff*
    Zuko...seems a little distraught. Can you tell us how his mother died?
    And one more thing. I know you've typed it in another story, but do you know about Zuko's supposed "sister", Zula?
    I swear the creators took my idea! My character, Fyiarah, is Zuko's sister...
    Ack, sorry to ramble. Love the story. Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 22, 2005
    Interesting ceremony, and I rather like the commentary about the Water Tribe funeral customs. Should be interesting when and if Katara gets up enough courage to talk to Zuko about that. Laters.
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  • From ANON - tab-sempai on November 22, 2005
    Great chapter. Interesting cremated by your relatives. did you love the last episode? Katara kicked butt!!
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  • From ANON - Scarylady on November 21, 2005
    NEW CHAPTER!!! WOOOOOT! Sad one though, I wonder how Zuko's mom died...Ummm...question though: I most Asian cultures white, not black, is the color of mourning...and everyone in the funeral was wearing black...Writers licence I guess. ^-^ Still tormented over the question of Katara's conditions...OH! By the way, love your new artwork! The one with Zuko, Katara, and their baby is sooooooo cuuuuuuuute! ^-^ Squee!
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  • From ANON - Shadow Stealer on November 21, 2005
    Geee, that didn't make me more confused.
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on November 21, 2005
    Hi there, it's me again. This chapter was okay. The funeral was respectful and pretty elaborate. One question: I was wondering how did Kiana died? I hope it wasn't much trouble asking this. I was just curious on how someone who was fine one night died so suddenly? Let us know something about that soon, okay? Anyway good job on this chapter, good luck with chapter 26. See you soon, I'll be offline from Wednesday till Saturday for Thanksgivng break. I'll be back on Sunday, good luck with the rest of this story and Happy Thanksgiving!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Chad on November 21, 2005
    Excellent chapter Spleef! ^^ You sure know how to make good details in your stories :) I can't wait to see more ^^
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  • From ANON - Mel on November 21, 2005
    Zutara smut is yum
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  • From ANON - Inu Esca Fanatic on November 21, 2005
    i love the story, i hope you review soon.
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  • From ANON - Zukoscute2 on November 21, 2005
    YAY! update! though slightly disappointed about now fluff.
    Inner Devil: fluff-
    ME: don't say it, i already know, and she doesn't need 2.
    Flame: YES SHE DOES!
    ME: y?
    Flame: well, uh, u c, uh...
    ME: just 4get it.
    Inner Devil: but-
    ME: PUT A SOCK IN IT! ahh, i'll b trying 2 update OAE ASAP, but now, ch. 3 is up.
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  • From ANON - Katuko on November 21, 2005
    what could i say..beautiful, enchanting...blah blah. always the same, but that's a pro right? anywho, i liked the ending..it's so relaxing. makes me feel so ... relaxed and happy. but who couldn't be with ZKness? can't wait for next chap^^
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  • From ANON - SlpnDrgn13 on November 21, 2005
    AW!

    Poor Katara...

    Me: That was nice of Iroh to shake that old fart off Zuko. GO IROH!

    Jun: YEA! (Waves pom poms)

    Inner child+Me:...
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  • From ANON - Fightingdreamer5 on November 21, 2005
    That was (once again) an unbeliveabul (spelling?) chapter! This story is probobly the best I have ever read on this sight! Have good luck with the rest of the chapters! Update soon! Also: You don't have to answer, but, what was the last thing Zuko had to do? Hopfully you will reveil it in the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on November 21, 2005
    Hi there, it's me again. I do hope you post chapter 25 real soon. We can hardly wait to see what happens next. Please post it here real soon!!!!!!!!!!!!! THe suspense is killing me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 20, 2005
    Great story!

    marvoluse plot line!
    a bit on the agnst side, but the use of character really out weighs that!

    GOOD JOB

    +++++
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