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Reviews for Hot Water

By : Spleef
  • From ANON - vyvyan on July 11, 2010
    also, what is the importance of the mark he gave her?
    you CANT JUST LEAVE THOSE SORTS OF THINGS HANGING!
    people are dying out here!

    pensively,
    vy
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  • From ANON - vyvyan on July 11, 2010
    where is the rest????????????????????????
    AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH i go to volcano and it is not a continuance but a divergence!!!!!!!!!
    you cruel cruel cruel person
    please have mercy and provide the real ending please
    with out being dramatic, i think i will DIE if i don't find out what zuko does to best the devious zhao and the gross kougyu
    and i really want to see sokka again!!!!!!
    and what is aang doing?????

    by the way, THANKYOU for the whole pregnancy thing being a false alarm. i was so annoyed when i thought her illness was leading up to that and then she thought she was and i was sooo frustrated i mean she is only 14 and he 17 that would have been such a stupid road to go down and too many zutaras take that road but thankfully you have proved once again that you are amazing and incredible and i totally LOVE you for writing what i consider to be the BEST fan fic i have ever read.

    Of course i am going to read volcano and yes it will probably be awesome but still... i will only be half alive until hot water is completed so please put me out of my misery and update soon.
    if i have to beg you every day i will!!!

    also could you possibly invent a horrific death for kougyu??? like what you did to ozai but more gory because he is one disgusting character. i hope i am spelling the name write but i am too tired to go back and check.

    also the err... water whip scene was very amusing. much rofling to be had XD

    i've said it before but i will say it again, the way you write is so clear. action flows, dialogue flows, characters are alive it is just simply awesome.

    in the throes of death,
    vy
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  • From ANON - vy on July 10, 2010
    thankyou so much for this it is seriously quality and fills me with utter joy. i could only read two chapters this morning so i will be dying to read this by the time i get home from work and i can't wait. I can't believe how many chapters there are and none of them disappoint or feel like fillers. does the world of fanfiction have awards or competitions cos you deserve some kind of recognition for this.
    thanks again for bringing me rays of awesome zutara into my existence
    ardent reader vy
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  • From ANON - vy on July 10, 2010
    i can not thank you enough for the cold fire arc.
    i am new to your works and i am not really into shipping but wow! i am completely sold on your zutara. i simply can not express how amazingly awesome the hot water book is. thankyou sooo much for making my life brighter. i am up to the part where katara has been hiding Ozai's concubines' rooms. so good how you incorporated the sister of zhao. I desperately want to read the rest but its 3 mins to midnight and i have to get up early for work tomorrow. still, i just had to review.
    i do have two quibbles though.
    on the ship when you refer to the 'dock' do you mean 'deck' or is it an american word that is lost on me as a non-american? Also, i've noticed that instead of saying "an apple" you write "a apple" is that too an American thing?
    Also, on the ship, Iroh gave katara a gorgeous robe, was that zuko's mother's? that bit went over my head i think.
    You have everyone so in character it is just so amazing.
    Thankyou for following this story right to the end so that they actually arive in the firenation. it was awesome reading about zuko returning victorious. i loved the descriptions of the opulent palace life.
    omg so stressful when zuko sees aang all abused! so glad that he has come to his senses!
    can i say again just how much i love your Zuko! he is incredible great. brooding and tender and saturnine and just basically dark in the way that we all love him to be XD
    i suppose azula would probably have ruined the story but i cant help but wonder whether she would have created another interesting dynamic.
    i feel like i could go on and on about this story (and i probably will do so tomorrow much to the chagrin of all around me)i mean it is actually as fantastic as the actual cartoon (though in many ways it actually surpasses it)
    so thanks from the darkest depths of my heart for such perfect entertainment
    reverently yours,
    vy.
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  • From ANON - Esme Weatherwax :) on July 05, 2010
    I can't wait to read the rest of this fic! You have a very well thought out story! I do have one question. At one point Iroh asks Zuko if Katara knows what the mark means. He says she doesn't. I never saw what it means. Did I skip a section or a chapter? I have a 3 year old so it is entirely possible that overlooked it.
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  • From ANON - Shard on June 24, 2010
    Great chapter, I enjoyed it so much at the end I just wanted to keep on reading. I look forward to your next installment.
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  • From ANON - Bunny on June 23, 2010
    I think this story is reaily great I've been reading this for Ll 32 chapters thisone and kiss of fire "witch I'm stil waiting on" lol there both my fav so keep them comin
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  • From ANON - Anon. on June 12, 2010
    Hi there, Spleef. Cool chapter. I hope that Katara will trust Lily and meet with her about her message and that she'll also help Lily with her situation. I do hope that Zhao and Kougyo will get what's coming to them and that Zuko will counteract their actions like warning Omashu ahead of time about Zhao and finding and freein the Water Tribe warriors. Anyway nice touch in Zuko pretending to consider Zhao's actions and forming his own plans. See you soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - Chibinelly on June 03, 2010
    Liked the smutt. It's good to see Tara becoming more open and direct towards Zuko now. I wander when she'll also be in love with him as he is in her
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  • From ANON - Shard on June 02, 2010
    Great chapter, I can't wait to see how Zhao gets dealt with and it does look like some nice new directions will be explored. I look forward to your next installment.
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  • From ANON - LunaLovegood67 on June 02, 2010
    I hate Zhao and Kougyo right now! Poor Sokka; what will Katara do??
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  • From ANON - bebe2pink on June 01, 2010
    DO you like Strawberry? i`m just asking b/c your screen name and you had something about Strawberry in one of your story. LOL I know its a dum thing to ask but..i was just thinking...yeah i`m being a weirdo..XD
    O and I LOVE ALL YOUR STORYS..
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  • From ANON - Shard on May 28, 2010
    Thanks for anouther great chapter. I was wondering if your going to have Aang confront Zuko and Katara in this version. Any way I look forward to the next one.
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  • From ANON - Chibinelly on May 24, 2010
    Yay another long update ! Thanks ! Loved the chappie. I hate those ladies who said bad things to Katara. I hope they get back for every little word they said to hurt her
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  • From ANON - Chibinelly on May 21, 2010
    ohhhhh a cliffhanger :-( I dnt think Zuko will shout at Tara and do anything bad. After all he cnt blame it on her, it's all his fault. anyway he loves her too much to get rid of the baby. I think he's gng to be happy abt the baby and rejoice over it. Am I right? I hope I am because Tara had sufferred enough. She deserves a happy ending with Zuko :-)
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