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Reviews for Hot Water

By : Spleef
  • From ANON - La Dolce on January 20, 2006
    ...that was tres bien.
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  • From ANON - blushingrose18 on January 20, 2006
    If I may ask, angry Spleef, what was the rumur that came to life? Please, do not quit writing, or be so angry, you are so wonderful. An awesome writer and a terriffic artist. I would like to get to know you. Please e-mail me? It is of your choice, of course.

    'Rose
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  • From ANON - Nilikeye on January 20, 2006
    Short but,
    SUPER COOL! SUPER AWSOME!
    I love when Katara stars having feelings for him!
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  • From ANON - Katuko on January 20, 2006
    -sigh- that was so beautiful... you're one of the few authors who make fanfiction worth reading. And the return of the assasin! YAY I like his character. It's really well developed...or maybe it's just me XD
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  • From ANON - SovereignxXxBrunette on January 20, 2006
    awsome chapter! please update soon!
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  • From ANON - hypRkat on January 20, 2006
    really INTENSE!
    story's a little long, tho. but u are an AWESOME writer!
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  • From ANON - hypRkat on January 20, 2006
    oh!CLIFFHANGER! amazing and completely original! very interesting, too
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  • From ANON - Zukoscute2 on January 20, 2006
    i read al the lemony goodness, this wuz a good scene, i've been wondering about the Dragon person, Y DO THEY HAVE TO BE SO (censored) IGNORANT?
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  • From ANON - darkavatar13 on January 20, 2006
    finally, FINALLY u update after like wat, a long time? good chapter though it took forever
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  • From ANON - Jo on January 20, 2006
    Hi, I love your story. I've been reading since before the Angi Kai, but (stupid me) didn't realise that non-members could review till you mentioned it! I really love how you keep the side characters reappearing in the story, it gives a real feeling of continuity. I'd agree that you are the best Zutara writer out there. And I prefer longer chapters with longer waits, but quickness is appreciated too! Also, will Katara's new nickname stick? Katty? Are you still going to bring back Sokka, like you did with Shi-Ryuu? Please do! I love your story, and keep on writing, please! =)
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  • From ANON - odessa on January 20, 2006
    Yay, another yummy chapter of Hot Water. I just love how you wrote about Iroh, Kiana, and Kitar. It gives a little bit more insight into why you have written the characters the way they are. I hope to see more and hear more about Kitar. He is my favorite of your original characters. He has so much potential and you've built him to have so many dimesions. Kitar's development is something I will eagerly read about and watch. I also really want to find out more about his relationships with Zuko, Iroh, his parents and most especially his partner, The Dark Mist. I foresee another side story, that can join your other wonderful fic Volcano.
    YOU ARE the best Zutara writer, and I think being the best can sometimes intimidate persons from leaving reviews because they think you expect a review that is a profound disertation and analysis of your chapter. TO ALL WHO READ THIS FIC, I think a simple "Great Chapter" is also also appreciated very much by the Spleefmistress, it really does not have to be something like what I've written, because appreciation and thanks even if it is simple or short is always Great for a writer. So to show my appreciation of your talented skills, I'd like to add Thank you for this wonderful fic and for introducing me to Zutara. Keep up the wonderful storytelling. :D
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  • From ANON - Scarylady on January 19, 2006
    Your chapters are always worth the wait! At first I found Shi-Riuu (I think I misspelled that, sorry) really creepy but now...he really, REALLY needs a hug. YAY for Katara and her mad peace-making skilz!!!! AMAZING chapter! When I saw you had updated I did a mental happy-dance ('cuz honestly, it's hard to do a silly dance with a computer in your lap). Now we are left with the burning question (pun kinda intended): WHAT DOES KATARA's BURN MARK SIGNIFY!!!!!!!! THE SUSPENSE IS DEADLY!!!!! YAY for the new chapter!
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  • From ANON - SleepingDragon on January 19, 2006
    AH! I've been pimped! (dies)

    Great chapter, the drama hot the spot! I also loved Kitar's nickname (boy-toy!) Thats what we call my friend Tessa's boyfriend...lol!
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  • From ANON - Ami on January 19, 2006
    I just wanted to let you know that I’m really enjoying your story. I really liked Katara’s conversation with ‘Death Dragon’ and the way she held herself, very nicely done. Oh and I gotta know what Katara’s mark means! I mean I’m sure I could hazard a good guess but still, confirmation is much anticipated. I also know I’m one of the many that don’t review like I should and I understand that fanfiction authors don’t get paid for this stuff so reader feedback is all you get, I will try to be better in the future.

    Now, you may very well be the best Zutara author out there [and I’d have to agree with that assessment] but I’m still not sure as to why authors writing said ship or anything other Avatar story related should credit you to the nickname of Tara in reference to Katara. It’s a very easy nickname to pick out of said name, just like Kat, Katty, Kattie or hell even Katie. I mean it would be different if this was a nickname with a direct reference to something specific happening in your story but that doesn’t seem to be the case here. I also read Harry Potter and I cannot even begin to tell you how man times I’ve seen Hermione shortned to ‘Mione within the stories yet I don’t see any of these people crediting another fanfiction author for the nickname nor do I remember ever seeing J.K.Rowling refer to Hermione as such, so though I don’t believe it to be canon its not an original idea that one person can claim sole ownership on. Now, did you just happen to come out with the nickname first? More than likely, the Avatar fanfiction base is still relatively small in comparison to other fandoms but I still don’t see how every author that comes after you should credit you for such a thing. I’m not trying to start a confrontation or anything, I’m just stating my opinion on the topic – sorry if I offended on that front.

    Anyway, I just wanted to let you know that I’m really enjoying the story and I hope to see another chapter in the near future.
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on January 19, 2006
    Hi there, this chapter was pretty interesting. I'm glad that they're all starting to get along. I do hope that Shi will find the Dark Mist and get back together again. I'm also glad that Zuko understands of why Iroh was with Kiana. Anyway hope you update Volcano soon, keep up the good work and see you later!!!!
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