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Reviews for Hot Water

By : Spleef
  • From ANON - Badgrl74 on January 27, 2006
    Kitar-dirty deeds done dirt cheap (well not exactly cheap)
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 26, 2006
    Nice. There's hope for those two yet. And I kind of like the idea of Zuko letting Kitar wack a couple of the die-hard Ozai-lolayist generals "discreetly". Makes it easier to replace them with people who are loyal to the new regime. Well, looking forward to the next chappie. Laters!
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  • From ANON - jesse2 on January 26, 2006
    Hmmm...interesting.
    I think that Katara's mark really means that she is betrothed to Zuko. Either that or already married.
    Hurry with the next chapter, I think I know where you were going when you left off...
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  • From AloofandAndrogynous on January 26, 2006
    GOOD STUFF!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon5 on January 26, 2006
    And another hot chapter. Bravo Spleef. I'm loving this. now please update soon on this as well as Volcano :D
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  • From ANON - kayko15 on January 26, 2006
    That's not fair. You stopped it right before the good part. I'm so depressed now.
    Zuko: DOn't mind Kayko, she's always depressed.
    Me: Anyway great chapter. I'm glad things worked out.
    Zuko: Me too. More of me and Katara next chappy though.
    Me: You just said chappy Zuko.
    Zuko: So...
    Me: *Shrug* Anyway update when you get the chance. Later. K15
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  • From Pizazz on January 25, 2006
    Ah, an excellent piece of fanfiction. ^o^ I haven't enjoyed a fanfic this much for quite some time now!

    I don't think Shi is a Gary Stu. He plays a very good role in the story without entirely stealing attention away from the Zutara-ness. None of your original characters are really Sue-ish at all. Plus, you did a magnificent job with Iroh and Kiana's little affair. I'm not exactly sure how to phrase it, but you just went about it in a way that makes the reader understand their decision - like one can understand why they did it, and that Iroh was everything Kiana should've had...*ahem* You know what I mean...^^;

    Now, there is one criticism I'm going to have to make, and it's not about the story or characters - it's about the grammatical structure. Namely, you have multiple run-on sentences. At least they seem like run-on sentences to me. If you wish, I'd be more than happy to do some beta reading for you, or anything that may be of assistance to you.

    So yeah, I'm very impressed with Hot Water. The canon characters seem very in-character to me, and your original characters bring their own light into the story. You've managed to bring originality and life into a story that could very easily have been cliched and dull. I look forward to seeing more of it.
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  • From ANON - Shadow Stealer on January 25, 2006
    Wow!!! Shi is human!!! That's AMAZING!!! I have to try the "scorpian" thing next time I get a chance...........
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  • From ANON - Jo on January 25, 2006
    Yay! Update-ness! Hmm... The mark, huh? Is it a bad thing, since Zuko said that she would be mad? Maybe a you're-now-a-member-of-the-fire-nation thing, maybe? Or some mark of Angi, which would make her angry because of her loyalty to Sedena? You never told us who sent the evil spirit to Katar's mother. But I'm happy for Shi! He deserves happiness. And at least soon Zuko won't have so much opposition. Whatever happened to Momo and Appa though? And Shi's parents suck. Thankyou for updating! And please don't make us suffer too long waiting for the secret of the mark! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Scarylady on January 25, 2006
    YAY!!!!!! This chapter made me sooooooo happy! Doesn't it just make you feel good inside when things go from torturous and heartwrenching to happy? I hope Shi finds Dark Mist...especially if he finds out something bad happened to her...eww...that could get REEEEEEAAAAAAALY messy. But I think (hope) he'll find her, though convincing her to come back might be fun...I love it when my favorite fanfiction authors update (your'e one of them if you can't tell), it just makes me so happy. ^-^ Can't wait to find out what happens next.
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  • From ANON - queenyasha on January 25, 2006
    Honey! You can pimp me out anytime! As for your story I must say, "WOW!!!" So intense, so real. but someting bothers me... What ever happened to Katara being pregers? Did she ever go see the Dr? Did I skip a chappie? I don't think I did. Did I tell you about the grapefruit? I hate to think I missed even one thing but you know I am old!! LOL!! Thanxs again for the hard work you put into your chappies I really enjoy them! And for pimping me out!! I'm a Smutt W@#%&!!!
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  • From ANON - Airforce on January 25, 2006
    reading it since the biggining love it and if you need knew ideas for different stories just ask
    I give this story a 5 out of 5
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  • From ANON - La Dolce on January 25, 2006
    Awesome chapter. Ir's nice to see Jee got some props by being promoted.

    I have no idea who the Dark Mist could be...she's so different. Suki?????

    I thought the mark meant Katara belonged to him?
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  • From ANON - SleepingDragon on January 25, 2006
    LOL! I loved it when Shi flipped Jee off! Jee is awsome but that was too funny!
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on January 25, 2006
    Hi there, this chapter is pretty good. I'm glad that Shi and Zuko knows the truth. I was a little stunned about what happened to Kiana, and I'm also glad that Zuko wasn't mad at what Katara did. I think it was silly when Shi made those funny jokes, they were a little humorous. Anyway good luck with Volcano, keep up the good work and see you later!!!!
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