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Reviews for Hot Water

By : Spleef
  • From ANON - Vicki So on February 09, 2006
    Wonderful chapter! I love how you tied it front and back with the "little scorpion" - so cute.
    I'm glad there's been a reconciliation between Zuko and Shi, and I like that Zuko's giving his cousin his old ship and crew as a legacy to a kind of hunt. Nice.
    Boy, you're just covering off all the bases with this story. I have no idea where you're going to go from here! I look forward to seeing what else you have in store!
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  • From ANON - wilderness-writer on February 09, 2006
    Squee! Great chapter! Katara's so good for Zuko. I really hope it turns out in the show the way it turns out in your story: they both realize that they compliment and strengthen each other.
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  • From ANON - darkavatar13 on February 09, 2006
    Me: long chapter
    Lena: aren't they always long?
    Me: ...yeah i guess but still, long chapter
    Lena: update soon
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  • From ANON - Mica on February 07, 2006
    I know I haven't reviewed in a while...but I have excuses! I've been busy!

    Or...something like that...

    Point being, ta-zzah! I return!

    I like what you've done with Shi-chan...much more of a character now, than a random plot device. Very good.

    you may want to watch out for verbal tendancies in Zuko, though...he seems..aweful even-tempered and well-cultured...almost OOC. I think he'd be a little more of...well...a guy. More Guy-ish in his turn of phrase, a bit less refined.
    Not a lot, but at least some...maybe?
    *tries to not sound pushy*

    hmmm....I miss Aang!

    Rly...the kid's gotta come back to the fire nation eventually...can't be Avatar if he doesn't know Firebending, eh?

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  • From ANON - Wikka on February 05, 2006
    AAAGH!!! havent you tortured us long enough?! YOU HAVE TO WRITE MOREEE!!!! PLEEEAAAAASSSSSSSEEEEEE!!!!! you cant just leave it like that! thats just not cool! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more!

    ~Wikka
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  • From ANON - Lish on February 04, 2006
    It was a fantastic read so far. I can't wait to read the next installment.
    The way you portray Katara and Zuko is just so entertaining. I am by far, very impressed.
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  • From ANON - fir123 on February 03, 2006
    thats soo goood maybe you are the best writerbin your class uh
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on February 03, 2006
    Hi there, it's me again. I hope I'm not pushy, but when are you going to update this story here? I read Volcano and it was great. I'm glad you updated it, but I do hope we see another chapter here soon. Anyway good luck with thses two stories, hope you update this story soon, and see you later!!!!
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  • From ANON - jesse2 on January 29, 2006
    One more word from me, and it's big news! It has been confirmed that the new season of Avatar (Book Two- Earth) will be starting on March 17th!
    And, here's an interesting fact, Episode 27 is called "Zuko Alone". I don't have an episode dicription or airing date, but the title sounds promising...

    Not to sound greedy, but could you please recognize me in the introduction to your next chapter? I want everyone to know about this!
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  • From ANON - No Name on January 29, 2006
    Sorry 'bout not reviewing for a while... schoolwork begins to pile up after vacations and the ELA and now other tests...*sigh* Any way good story, and like I say on MediaMiner.org I will leave a review when the story is done... But still... I guess i could arrange for a chorus to sing your praises but... too much paperwork... Anyway you're one of the best I've R&R'd in my years of being a net-reviewer... Keep up the good work^.^!





    signed, Joshua Jehanna a reviewer and character in guild wars.
    P.S. from now on my reviews will have the name Joshua Jehanna I don't mind if you call me Josh or JJ but of the tow I'd rather you call me Josh.
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  • From ANON - No Name on January 29, 2006
    Sorry 'bout not reviewing for a while... schoolwork begins to pile up after vacations and the ELA and now other tests...*sigh* Any way good story, and like I say on MediaMiner.org I will leave a review when the story is done... But still... I guess i could arrange for a chorus to sing your praises but... too much paperwork... Anyway you're one of the best I've R&R'd in my years of being a net-reviewer... Keep up the good work^.^!





    signed, Joshua Jehanna a reviewer and character in guild wars.
    P.S. from now on my reviews will have the name Joshua Jehanna I don't mind if you call me Josh or JJ but of the tow I'd rather you call me Josh.
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  • From ANON - Badgrl74 on January 28, 2006
    I love this story! It is all worth it when you put in the intricate details of each of their lives. And the flashbacks just add to the character development. Kitar is a great character, and Kasumi reminds me of Jun, but I'm probably wrong. I'm am totally engrossed in this plotline! The darkness adds to the reality of it all. Anyways, I have to go get pictures done(yuk). I hope this crack was good.........
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  • From ANON - Odessa on January 28, 2006
    Yay more Kitar. I love the interaction you wrote between Kitar and Zuko. You really did a great job about explaining the circumstances surrounding their pasts. I also love the scene between Zuko and Katara, their relationship is continuing to grow, hopefully enough that Katara can finally say "I Love You".
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  • From ANON - Badgrl74 on January 28, 2006
    Wow, I love Dune too! I have all the DVD's of the newer version and the Children of Dune. Fear is the Mindkiller! This story is fucking awesome. I cheered after Agni-Kai! Also, I thought it was beautiful when you had Zuko and Katara make love. The references reminded me of Song of Solomon from the Bible when Solomon and his concubine are speaking of their passions for each other. Great work! I'm new to fanfiction, about a couple of weeks, so I'm still getting used to everything.
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  • From ANON - Kylena on January 27, 2006
    Love the story. :) I've also been impressed by the skill you have shown at allowing the character to mature and learn of each other. Have to say it is one of my favorites (Although the spin off is awesome too..I have a thing for your presentation of the old Zuko)

    *stuffs more food for thoughts so more chapters keep coming*
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