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Reviews for Belle of the Ball Until Dawn Comes...

By : StarwolfRealms
  • From agron999 on February 19, 2015
    this was a very great story are there gonna be more with G3?
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  • From bloodravyn on December 26, 2010
    is it weird that i like this?
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  • From FairySlayer on December 01, 2010
    After seeing the new "My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic" opening episodes I just had to look up the stories here. Though you use characters I don't know and who are based on the old series I still got a great sense of Twinkle Twirl's personality: I loved how she was generous to the point where she can't dress nicely enough for the Friendship Ball herself. At that point I felt some glee that her wish was answered. The fact that it was a loving pegasus stud who did his best to give her a wonderful evening, even a very pleasant first sexual experience. That was described pretty well without being overly technical or graphic, which to me at least is better when dealing with animals: stopping to describe the differences in anatomy and all would take away from the gentle and romantic nature of the whole story itself.

    Now, I couldn't help but laugh at the line "Heavenly..." Twinkle almost purred, except that ponies don't purr. Whether intentional or not, it seemed like a bit of humor, and I have to admit to using similar snark in a few of my stories too. Either way it made me laugh, but it also described the sound and, more importantly, her feelings at the moment too. So it's a nice job there, just as Star Catcher himself was doing too.

    Another thing that gave me a chuckle, if only due to my cynicism, was how Star Catcher and a few of his friends met some fillies that night, ended up making love, and then took off first thing in the morning with a promise to see them again. In any other context it would sound like a one-night stand, but it's rather sweet here.

    I'm not going to pick on a few spelling and grammar issues, mainly because they were slight but also because the story was from five years ago. (I do hope that you stop in to see this review though. :)) Also, because of you I found out what withers are. :)

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  • From estelin on July 12, 2009
    this was excellent. keep up the good work and writing.
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  • From wendi-bnkywuv on September 12, 2008
    Very well written! I never thought I would ever find an R rated version of this show! You made my day! 'Twinkle almost purred, except that ponies don't purr.' That part made me laugh! 'Like most of the ponies, she had messed around with the girls...' I always knew them ponies were lil pervs!
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  • From SailorPoison on June 09, 2007
    This has to be one of the better stories to be found in this site. You managed to add adult actions without losing the spirit of the series. I rarly leave reviews unless I feel there is a need to express something. This case, I wish say you did very good.
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  • From Awenseth on March 20, 2007
    This was so addorable, My Little Pony was my favorite cartoon when I was little and I still love it...Great work.
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  • From ANON - Melody Fate on July 11, 2006
    I give you credit, Starwolf, you have major balls to the wall writing an erotic MLP story. For those who are upset that she wrote it, this is an ADULT site. If a child comes here, they are breaking the rules and that isn't Starwolf's problem.

    That all being said, this story cracked me up. Some pretty good writing skills in use here. Good sex scene too. But reading about someone named "Twinkle Twirl" being in the throes of passion was absolutely awesome. You deserve five stars just for writing and posting it. You deserve more because the writing itself wasn't bad at all.


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  • From ANON - Jox Box on June 19, 2006
    Its ok but I want to know who writes stories like
    My Little Pony" on and adult website no offence but its scary to know you are 18 or over so just how old are you lol.

    Its good otherwise!
    sincerely,joxbox
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  • From MademoiselleU on February 11, 2006
    You must be crazy! :D Where on Earth did you get an idea to write an erotic story about My Little Pony? Nevertheless, this story was fine and different. It really makes people react, it doesn't leave anyone cold.
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  • From ANON - Havok on January 15, 2006
    I really thought I would hate this fic. Hell, I wanted to hate it!
    But I didn't. In fact, I really liked it. Thanks for opening my mind a little!
    Nice job!
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  • From ANON - Lill on December 07, 2005
    AWWWW! That was so cute!
    I remember when I was little and watched My little pony all the time!
    They're so cute! I loved your story! It's great!
    And so darn cute! XD

    Heh...MELIKE! ^_^
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  • From on November 20, 2005
    Heh, that was pretty hot, tho hard to understand how a horse could message another with 'hand' like hooves... O_o however, update this one soon i'd like to read more..
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 09, 2005
    That was something differnt.
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  • From ANON - Tama-sama on October 13, 2005
    *ahem...* My litle pony... -.- Okaaay... GEEZ those ponies are GIRLY! Nice story though! ^_^ I'm not really a fan of the ponies, but I thought 'hey, what the heck? Just looking wont hurt!' It didn't. It really didn't. ^_^
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