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By : ShadowSlayer
  • From ANON - P.R on August 26, 2006
    please cuntinue! it can't end like that!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 14, 2005
    Wow.......Just wow. How do you do it? You are totally awesome at writing things like this. The scenes, the characters, and especially the emotions. You capture them perfectly. It all made me squee with happiness. And Oh Em Gee, a Jeremie centered fic that has nothing to do with Aelita! Who would've thought?

    That reminds me. When are the others coming in? ....They are coming in, right? They know how to work the supercomputer to a certain extent(In the episodes) so they should at least be able to get to Lyoko.

    Updating this would make my week. Please please pretty please update!
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  • From ANON - joe on November 30, 2005
    great u have to make more chapters plz
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  • From ANON - Random Kyuubi on November 27, 2005
    Wow. Just....Wow. You are so incredibly good at writing these types of things. Seriously. Please continue soon!
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  • From ANON - ShadowSlayer on November 20, 2005
    Payback was NOT written by me... that is an alternate ending created by another writter here on the site...
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  • From ANON - Shadow_Wolf22 on November 20, 2005
    Question! How did u go from payback to having Jeremy back in Zana's arms???????
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  • From ANON - ShadowSlayer on November 19, 2005
    Not bad of an ending and you certainly figured out where they really where. It would be great if it had paragraphs and proper sentences though... Anyway, I'm going to update now but I wont delete your version of the ending...
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  • From on November 15, 2005
    The concept is good but it ends to abruptly. Some slight alterations, like making it fit the format the original author used and continuing so we get some more answers-like how Xana got Jeremie to Lyoko in the first place, and it could work quite nicely.
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  • From on November 15, 2005
    Again, I was drawn in immediately. It's very interesting how Xana calls Jeremie pet and wants him to give in to him. It makes one wonder is Xana hadn't somehow watched Jeremie all of the times he was fighting the others on Lyoko. Speaking of the others, will they be making an appearence or is Jeremy stuck in Xana's clutches?
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  • From on November 15, 2005
    Very well written, I was drawn in at the very beginning but how did Xana become human and why is he interested in Jeremie? Will this be explained later on or is it basically a shmut story?
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  • From ANON - J-Bott on November 11, 2005
    This was verry good, (STRANGE) but good.
    Please write more
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 05, 2005
    *pokes* Where are the updates?!
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  • From ANON - Shana on September 18, 2005
    oh wow! hey is there any mo0re not to sound perverted or anything but this is a good story
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  • From ANON - Going Golda on August 18, 2005
    I feel really bad now.... It's because I now LOVE Xana. I kinda want Jerimie to like him. I feel so bad! Anyway I always like the good guys to be in a relationship with the bad guys.
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  • From ANON - morte on July 01, 2005
    i would just like you to know that i read this fanfiction almost 5 months ago it was my first fanfiction i read i want to thank you for this story that got me hooked on fanfiction i hope you can write some more but if you don't i understand i just want to tell you how great it is thank you for this beautiful story



    love,
    Morte Angel Sell



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