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Reviews for CAUGHT!!!!

By : Ramsey
  • From ANON - doubledamn on August 18, 2013
    Great story, not as smutty as I was expecting for this site, but a fantastic story nonetheless. Fantastic work, keep it up.
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  • From kwh on November 25, 2012
    Nicely done!
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  • From mistressofyaoi on January 04, 2010
    read this over the last two nights and i have to say a really good story over all very interesting
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  • From ANON - Kali on June 24, 2008
    I'll admit, I was looking for something to laugh at, to see how badly someone had screwed up the characters in the series I just got done watching. I didn't find it.

    You did an amazing job of keeping the characters in character while dealing with subject matter that didn't come up in the series. I noticed a few spelling and a grammar mistakes - a "your" instead of "you're" for instance - and I'm not entirely sure of the vocabulary used...but then, of course, it was never discussed on Daria, so that's not an issue. Anyway, fantastic characterization, and a very sweet story dealing with mildly adult themes while not completely fucking the characters over (pun intended).
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  • From on February 13, 2007
    That story, describes perfectly what I've done for people. How stubborn people can be. I think that anyone who ever got that sort of thing happen to them, should read this. But seriously, that is one HELL of a story. Kudos, and I tip my hat to you sirrah. *does so, big and flourishy* And also, this story taught me, that what is not seen, is not always that which is not there. There. But unseen. Very very very dangerous stuff.
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  • From tidalshark on July 19, 2006
    was this the first story on aff?
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  • From ANON - kevin sumpter on February 08, 2006
    big fan of daria the show and the fan fics love both great job will there be more maybe jody or andrea.well hpe to read more soon your fan kts in mass
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  • From JdWheels on December 26, 2005
    Well, I am inpressed as hell.

    Not only have you captured Daria, you made a story that is plausable, timely and all around great. I am going to search for more of your writings. If it is as good a this one, they all will appear in my favs list.

    Once again... good!!
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  • From ANON - Bekll on September 27, 2005
    Beautiful, stunning story. Flawless and with a moral. GREAT job.
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  • From ANON - inspector__zenigata on March 17, 2005
    I loved that show. the characters were perfect. Funny stuff, acidic quips running amuck.
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  • From Kayin on February 20, 2005
    I came into this story thinking it would be slightly better than average and I'm glad to say that I was completely wrong. I'm not gonna preach or anything but I will say that the problems you have addressed here are very real. It's a sad truth but it is a reality all the same. Thank you for putting together such a masterful tale about sexuality, mental anguish, self-love and friendship. Wonderful Job.
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  • From ANON - Mystic Dragon on December 31, 2004
    I'm very impressed. I'm tempted to say that this is the only serious story I've seen on AFF.net, but that would be a bit of a stretch.

    Even so, it's nice to see something other than the absurd amounts of slash and PWP stories. This was well thought out, and although there's no way in hell that it could be true, you played off of the traits that were there to make it seem possible. I also want to thank you for bringing to light the serious problems that our casual hipocracy causes...it's too easy to think that these rabid puritans are just spouting their moral agenda rather than realize that they use it as an excuse to use, abuse and control people in far more hideous ways than the "sins" that they are trying prevent. *shudder*

    I found this valuable because I consider myself a bit of a sex fiend, but still have the nasty aftertaste of a childhood in a catholic home, raised by a prude. This was a good reminder to bury the past and be myself :)
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  • From ANON - A Nonymous on November 11, 2004
    Wow, excellent storyline. Great insights into Darias mind and various issues. Fantastic work!
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  • From ANON - Avanell on October 17, 2004
    Cute! I could actually see the tv show reeling as I read. Very good at capturing theractracters, and nice "touch" with the sister bonding. Now, what is next for Daria? Hmm...
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  • From ANON - Lord Evil on June 10, 2004
    A really funny story, that aside form the the graphic scenes, could almost be an episode of the show. I could almost see most of the charcaters acting like this. Upchuck probably does sneak into the girl's locker room. The ending was really good, I'm glad Daria got over her fears about her own body, many teenagers have gone through stuff like what her parents did to her.
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