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Reviews for Childs Play

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  • From ANON - Anon on January 08, 2010
    This is a pretty funny fanfic. I think Jade and Paco look so cute together.
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  • From ANON - sara on August 25, 2006
    lol that was funny
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  • From ANON - Lefty on August 19, 2006
    Hey, do you mind if i add a chapter to continue this since u arent?
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  • From ANON - toamon on December 07, 2005
    comeon! get sum fucking sex in there!
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  • From ANON - Toamon on October 29, 2005
    you need to continue the story
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 05, 2005
    do more
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 23, 2005
    We want more Paco and Jade
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  • From RYoung on September 16, 2005
    Thats a good un
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  • From ANON - james on April 18, 2005
    i think you need to do another chapter where they get it on
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  • From dragonman on January 26, 2005
    Liked it. Actually, I added a bit at home, so if there are no objections, I might post it.
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  • From ANON - silver_mold on January 21, 2005
    Rather interesting - good character replication (however brief), enjoyable conflict. Would have liked to have read more. Continue, please.
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  • From on November 08, 2004
    This is a good story in all but I in my own opinion would never think that Jade would react that way near the end of the story and Paco would do this. Some grammar in your story has flaws in it so I would consider revising it again and this isn’t really a lemon as nothing really that "Naughty" happens in the story that doesn’t make it seem to be a lemon. So next time my advice for you is to try to stay in more character, revise your work, and adds more "Naughty" things. And please dont flame me on this
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  • From ANON - Sasha on August 29, 2004
    Cute!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 04, 2004
    Okay, this is more of an "R" rated story, for the nudity, such as it is, but otherwise, very cute. They were very in character, and truth be told, one could see one or the other of them secretly wondering what it would be like to see the other without their clothes on. Any chance of a continuation of some sort or another?
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 28, 2004
    Have a chapter of Jade and Paco gettin' it on... >.>
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