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Reviews for A Family Affair

By : belgarion15
  • From Phyrephreak2008 on August 02, 2009
    please please please please please please please please please update this story i am begging you to *gets on hands and knees* please please please please *kisses your feet* please
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  • From ANON - jonkon on February 07, 2006
    you rock keep up teh pimp work
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 22, 2006
    isnt jack jack a boy?
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  • From ANON - lizzie on December 07, 2005
    ended my message too soon. Like i was sayin, Jack-Jack is a girl! right? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! HE IS A BOY! BOY! BOY! BOY! BOY! BOY! BOY! BOY!
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  • From ANON - lizzie on December 07, 2005
    That was okay, but basically horrible. First, when you say kids, you should spell it kids, not kid's. If you say it kid's, you are basically saying "Kid is" or something the kid has. AND JACK-JACK IS A GIRL!GIRL!GIRL!GIRL!GIRL!GIRL!GIRL!GIRL!GIRL!GIRL! sO, overall, your story fuckin' sucks.
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  • From ANON - steel ranger on November 20, 2005
    didn't you post this on fanfiction.net and got booted????
    if it is i think it was wrong of them to do so and am happy you found a place where you can truly express yourself
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  • From ANON - Frank on October 29, 2005
    the story is great but how about the one when elastigirl when traped between the two door and if she was raped
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  • From ANON - DariusFF on October 09, 2005
    whoo! I love how you keep the fic story oriented and not so dirty... Its cool that you make violet so manipulative and bob so heroic/nice... one request can you make bob and helens relationship closer/sweeter? anyways... AWESOME! GREAT! SWEET! ... INCREDIBLE!! lol

    ps. a question will there ever be a 3-some? (mff) and hardcore images?
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  • From ANON - Jake. on September 28, 2005
    AWESOME STORY! more more more!!!
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  • From ANON - alex on June 07, 2005
    i really liked this story and wasvery well written and i would like to know how it ends.
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  • From ANON - SPIKE on May 29, 2005
    DUDE!!!!!!!!!!! GET TO THE FUCKING HOT DADDY DAUGHTER SEX!!!!!!!!!!! THATS WHY I WAS READING THIS, STORYS LIKE THIS THAT PROMISE SEX BUT DONT DELIVER ARE WORST THAN SEX AND THE CITY ON TNT
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  • From ANON - Vix on May 23, 2005
    Good story so far, still waiting for the "good stuff" by the way, jack-jack is a boy not a girl. the Parrs have two sons and one daughter. keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 09, 2005
    ........
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  • From ANON - wewewe on April 26, 2005
    wewewew
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  • From IncrediboyMeatShake on March 21, 2005
    Nice storyline going on, but having quotations(Like where a character's speaking?) starting a new paragraph would help. It would also help to be a bit more descriptive and almost always put who's saying what after the quote.

    Also, don't mean to pry, but.. Jack-Jack's a boy^^;
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