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Reviews for Losing Control

By : GabrielC
  • From LadyStarscream on February 16, 2010
    wow. I can hardly wait to read the next fanfic after this!
    This has been both exciting and suspenseful. And smutty. :-p

    I'll be waiting to read more of it! :-)
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  • From Crossfire120576 on February 10, 2010
    This was a great chapter!! I am on pins and needles waiting to find out what happens to everyone next!! I wanna know Prowls reaction to it all and poor Jazz-how he is able to deal with Ironhide and vice-versa!! This chapter really draws you in, and makes you interested. Keep up the good work and update sooooooon!! Pahleese!!! Bye for now!!



    Transform and Roll Out!!
    Crossfire aka
    Jaime
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  • From shozurei24 on January 17, 2010
    Ooh, that's not going to be easy to work out. How's Jazz going to explain himself to Ironhide?
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  • From bleedingink on December 22, 2009
    Nicey, nice! Keep 'em comin' - the chapters, I mean. ;)
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  • From Scienceteacher on November 20, 2009
    Ok, pretty good flow and 'plot' for a once shot smut fic. It is hard to read through all the run-on sentences though. I'd work on that a little more if I were you. You do show some raw talent, so don't take this to harshly. We're all here to improve...
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