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Reviews for Face Thy Fears

By : Scienceteacher
  • From Rockinmuffin on May 23, 2009
    Yay, an update! ^_^

    Seriously, I love Inferno in this. He’s so confident and sexy. xD And Spot’s shyness is so precious; gotta’ love that cute virgin innocence, though I guess she’s not a virgin any more now, huh. Seriously though, Inferno’s teaching lesson was hot. Mmm, fire engines… x3

    The bonding scene was cute. Still, I’m curious; because Spot opened up to Inferno, he knows all her secrets, right? So does that mean that he now knows everything that she was keeping from Red Alert and that, technically, she’s been lying about what she was since the very beginning? I’d imagine that, even though her intentions were pure, that this would cause some friction. Well, I guess I’ll just have to wait and see, won’t I? xD Well, nice job, and until next time. ^_^

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  • From gmjvju78 on May 06, 2009
    I also read your story "Finding the Good Within", this one looks like its twin story, I am so curious will the two stories finally cross over each other? That would be fun!
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  • From Rockinmuffin on May 03, 2009
    You know, I’ve seen this story around before but I only just decided to give it a shot. I’m glad that I did.

    I love Red Alert’s paranoia; it’s so funny. xD I just recently watched Auto Berserk or whatever that episode is when Red Alert goes crazy and teams up with Starscream.

    I loved SunSpot’s relationship with Raptor. It reminded me of my own relationship with my grandma and really made me miss her. I wish humans were as durable and lived as long as Cybertronians.

    I think I like SunSpot. Her shyness and lack of confidence is quite refreshing, her shyness especially. I like how she has developed; she’s a real sweetheart.

    Admittedly, I was a little iffy about how Red Alert just decided that he “didn’t love Inferno any more” because it sort of seemed like it was forced away so that Red Alert and SunSpot could have a romantic relationship. Of course, one can only imagine what Red went through and the sort of psychological effect that would have on him. Also, I understand that the large distance between them and the time spent away from Inferno would cause Red Alert to lose affection for Inferno just as his time with SunSpot made him grow fond of her. Basically, I think that the situation is plausible and believable but I thought it could’ve been done differently to make it seem a little more real. I think I would have been satisfied if Red Alert had thought over it a little more and had a tougher time making the decision that he did. Or maybe if you had put a little more emphasis on how betrayed Red Alert felt from Inferno while he was still captured by Starscream. Still, that’s my biggest and, really, my only complaint as far as this story is concerned.

    And poor Inferno! D: I wanted to hug him when Red Alert rejected him without so much as even a word. That’s cold, Red; ice cold.

    I liked the compassion SunSpot has for Inferno; it really makes me feel a lot less guilty for liking her despite the fact that Red Alert has just tossed Inferno aside.

    Heh. I’m glad SunSpot decided to “show” herself to Inferno too. It’s nice to know that she’s not the type to like just standing idly by while others suffer. And the thought of a threesome is certainly fun.

    God, Inferno is so fricking awesome. He doesn’t hold hard feelings for Red’s new bondmate. How many exes would do that, huh? Not many. It’s official; Inferno is the epitome of awesome. It was true in Beast Wars and it’s true in G1 despite the fact that the two are completely different characters. Still… whoo, Inferno! :3

    Oh, you’re so tricky! Made me think something juicier was going to happen because of the chapter title. Well, I guess you made up for it by including Inferno… But there better be smut by next chapter! xD Lol.

    Well, I’m glad I decided to give this fic a chance and spend hours reading the first 13 chapters. Hopefully this long-as-hell review will make up for the lack prior.
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