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By : AngelofTwilight
  • From missfae on July 04, 2010
    I am not sure if this story is completed or not but it was very nice.
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  • From tanisa666 on April 19, 2010
    that's good to know that at least megatron failed its goal, for the time being, poor Bee.
    please update soon ^ ^

    (sorry my bad inglish XD)
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  • From Arcadius17 on October 08, 2009
    Wow I haven't been on in a long time lol. Anyways, I'm loving the chapters you've managed to get up while I completely forgot that adultfanfiction even existed hehe. Please tell me you will be continuing? You can't end it there! I want to know what they called Moonchaser when he was a sparkling and also to know if there is going to be some sweet lovin' between Megs and Bee.
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  • From Arcadius17 on March 21, 2009
    Great chapter. If you want to make your chapter longer try to get more description and actions in the mix. Try reading some other stories like 'Cover Me' in the transformers section in the movies archive. That story is great for descriptions and body actions. Took me a while to figure out what the italic part was for but as I read it I'm pretty sure it's a flashback :P. Anxiously awaiting your next chapter

    NetherOnyx
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  • From Dragolover2 on March 17, 2009
    Yay! New chapter! When you update again, will Megatron actually get Bumblebee and try to bond with him? I'd love to see that! Update ASAP!
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  • From Arcadius17 on March 13, 2009
    Welcome back :D This chapter was interesting. I understood the Crush in Roll Crush's name in the flashback but the Roll part is escaping me. I didn't see how rolling could be thought of when he was chargin Nori... unless he was rolling while charging. And I think the word you were trying to find was "sentient" not "sentinal". I'm dying to find out how Midnightrunner is going to explain what happened when he was questioning Moonchaser.
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  • From Arcadius17 on November 25, 2008
    You could make your paragraphs like more than one-liners. So you can include some more detail other than dialogue and facial expressions. I'm getting anxious to see how this will turn out keep the chapters coming : D.

    ~NetherOnyx
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  • From Arcadius17 on November 24, 2008
    Ok thanks for the explanation although i gotta say to the TF:A ppl wtf Red Alert isn't a medic he or she...whatever the case may be is head of security. But what ever you want make him/her then i'll just have to take it in stride. Great chapter loved the emotional flusterations *spell check lol*
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  • From dino1 on November 24, 2008
    I wonder if Bee remembers? The last time he was in the picture he was reliving flashbacks. I like the character growth in the last 2 chapters.
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  • From Dragolover2 on November 23, 2008
    When will we see more BBxMoonchaser loving? Or BumblebeexAnyone loving? And welcome back! Update ASAP!
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  • From ToonQueen on November 23, 2008
    Gasp a short chapter, but now someone else knows about the chamber and Moon bonding with Bee. GASP! :O MOREEEEE!
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  • From ToonQueen on November 21, 2008
    Omg good! I like the angle of Bee not remembering. ;_; Poor Moonchaser!
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  • From Arcadius17 on November 18, 2008
    First off since when is Red Alert a girl? That's kind of weird and a little confusing as to why you changed 'his' gender. I didn't really see a point to that. But hey it's your story you can do what you want, although I would appreciate an explanation cuase really I'm dumbfounded.

    Flashback was very effective, you tied up those loose ends effectively. Good job I'm anxiously awaiting chapter 20

    ~NetherOnyx
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  • From GhostsofElysium on October 08, 2008
    Gah, ignore Harley! There fic, to me, is to violent and random -_- I think yours is much cuter.
    I'm excited for the next chapter ^^
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  • From dino1 on October 07, 2008
    Interesting story. I wonder how happy everyone will be when they figure out the age that Moonchaser bonded to Bee. I also wonder when the 'bots find ot why Megatron is after Bee will he be too valuable to put into combat. I can't wait for update!
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