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Reviews for Rehabilitation

By : DeeDaday
  • From Scienceteacher on November 08, 2008
    OK, can't contact you directly, so I'm forced to ask you here. Can I use your activator device idea? I'll be using it in my Five Phases of Torture story, so just leave a 'yay or nay' in the review section of it.

    Killer concept I must say!
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  • From Scienceteacher on November 05, 2008
    Yes, I do agree that those of us whom read these stories should RR them. There's a much higher percentage of reviews per hits on fanfiction - and you have to admit that most of these stories are much more intense!

    Ok, off my bandwagon lecture.

    This story was very well-written, had several very humorous points, and yet still had some parts that made me feel sorry for Prowl. I'm still a little distracted when you put (things in these) which somewhat disrupts the flow, but they are few and far between. So not terribly distracting.

    Please continue to write, you have a lot of promise showing!
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  • From ToonQueen on November 03, 2008
    That was very awesome, my fave line was, “I gotta see how my bike is runnin’ before I take you… off-road.” Lockdown is such a lovable asshole. XD
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  • From on November 01, 2008
    Okay, so I totally already commented, but I thought I'd get your review count up. ^_^

    BEST. ROBOTSEX. EVAR. Also awesome on the emotional side. Oh, Lockdown, when will you learn it's hopeless to resist Prowl's promises of spark-to-spark lalalaing? YOU WILL GIVE IN.

    A++!
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