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Reviews for Jerimies Birthday Present

By : Erik
  • From ANON - killer200 on October 21, 2006
    that was great i see great potental in you.
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  • From ShadowSlayer on September 30, 2004
    This is pretty good. I really like the first chap Not Not really sure why though. *Shrugs* An, go, god job.
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  • From ANON - Neo Aguni on August 20, 2004
    It's good but you need to get descriptive
    it was all thrown together but a good story none the leass
    write another J/A and be a little more descriptive and stuff
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  • From ANON - kevin on August 17, 2004
    make a chapter of Yumi and Ulrich confessing their love then making it ...
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  • From on August 17, 2004
    I liked it. There aren't that many of this show's so it's good. Definately make one between Yumi and either Ulrich or Odd(sp?).
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 16, 2004
    It was good but it could of been better this story was pretty much skin and bones with hardly any detail
    other than that its a fine story look forward to more
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  • From ANON - jasmine on August 15, 2004





    Make a longer more intense chapter with Ulrich and Yumi in it

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  • From ANON - Kouji on August 11, 2004
    Wrong, but good Code Lyoko hentai eh? hmm... I wish I could write a good hentai/lemon fivc, but no I sucj at it, Oh well cool story.
    ~Kouji
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  • From ANON - Fanfan on August 10, 2004
    Great, I would love it if you added a Yumi/Ulrich chapter.
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  • From ANON - Lady Moon on August 10, 2004
    I liked it, and I say contiue the stroy. Ja ne, for now.
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  • From ANON - Lady Hikari on August 10, 2004
    Hmm...not bad. Very good, actually. Please write another fic with Yumi and Ulrich. I'm very interested since I can't seem to find decent fics like this one. Oh, and I'm sure other people will post fics since this section has just been added. Later, ace; see you around!
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  • From ANON - Captian Theodore Laflaga on August 07, 2004

    IT WAS A GREAT STORY A LITTLE SHORT BUT U KNOW WAT THEY SAY QUALITY OVER QUANTITIY.
    SO KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK AND WRITE MORE CHAPTERS.
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  • From ANON - Lady Moon on August 07, 2004
    Not bad, not bad. Consedering what you had to work with, you did a great job. My only subjestions I can think of, is to dubble cheack your spelling, and give a little bet more detal, or as I like to put it, get more wordy. It is ys bys better to have too much, than to little. Well anyways. Great job. I hope to see more of your storys soon.
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  • From ANON - Codelyokofan on August 07, 2004
    Not bad, could have been a little longer and you need to work on your spacing abit, but it was pretty good and I hope to see more.
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  • From ANON - Goeleven on August 05, 2004
    It was good. could you please continue it with Alita being materialized?
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