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Reviews for Intruder

By : IncoherentThought
  • From ANON - Chaos on July 16, 2010
    'He noted that Zim’s member looked pretty much like a humans besides the fact that it was the same color as the rest of his body, and that he lacked genitals'

    if zim lacks genitals, how can his member look like anything?
    do you mean testicles?
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  • From ANON - 'Nilla on April 24, 2010
    This is just delicious. I'm such a fan of the Dib-getting-caught-and-screwed(in many senses)-in-the-base idea. Bookmarking hardcore.
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  • From ANON - Keri on July 14, 2006
    |D~
    just
    |D~

    Oh Zim, you horrible alien bastard.

    Zim: That's mah job!
    Dib: /still sobbing/ What?! To fuck human boys and then break their hearts and make them OOC and angsty
    Zim: Well, duh.

    Ha, no, I just kid. I love it. Alot. I really did.
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  • From ANON - Kagome on June 25, 2006
    Oh yeah my fav couple in invader zim (purrs) two thumbs way up!!
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  • From ANON - AnnAnime on June 22, 2006
    That was Great! please write more.
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  • From ANON - Death over Time on May 22, 2005
    CoNGRatULAtionS

    You are the first god on my worship list. You like Yu-Gi-Oh! Congrats.
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  • From ANON - sabrina on March 01, 2005
    that was really good. i've never read an Invader Zim fanfic before... quite different.
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  • From ANON - Harryhollow on December 21, 2004
    This is so fucking amazing please could you email me if you update "Intruder" I just need to read more of it!!
    p.s. is Zim and dib going to have a baby and for sex "giggles"??
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  • From ANON - Ronin S. Oath on November 21, 2004
    This was an awesome story ^_^ I really hope you continue soon! I must hear more! What does the lighter shading of Zim's eyes mean? I must know! I must know or I will explode!
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  • From ANON - firecat on August 04, 2004
    wow..that was diifrent...ive never read a invader zim one before.. but id say that was pretty good
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  • From ANON - makota on July 11, 2004
    What a lovely piece of smut.

    Though I am an Invader Zim fan, I've never ventured to read the fanfics...this is one of the first I've read for this fandom, and I have to say that I am not dissapointed. Great work and I cheer your dirty mind. Excellent!
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  • From ANON - Potassium on April 02, 2004
    A bit of constructive criticism. I love ZADR like no other pairing, although I like stories where they take time to develop instead of suddenly happening in the matter of minutes. It was also rather hard to read; there were many grammatical and spelling errors. It wasn't in character.
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