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Reviews for A Liar's Lament

By : DragonShadow
  • From ANON - BlueMoonRising on January 04, 2013
    While your story has excellent characterization, it's spoilt by a very large plot hole.

    Clover first sees the Diocam and snatches it from Jerry, in front of her friends. Alex makes the comment that if the girls need rings, watches and tiaras in the future, they'll visit Jerry for more. Sam, Alex and Clover patrolled the Middle East gathering for hours while Clover was wearing that ring.

    So how could Sam have forgotten what the ring looked like in less than twenty-four hours? It just doesn't make sense especially when you consider how observant Sam is. Strangely enough Alex also forgot the Diocam's appearance, because both girls needed Jerry to remind them of it later in the story.

    Out of ten I give this story a five. Yes, the plot hole was that big.


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  • From Mangafreak on May 20, 2010
    a very good story. loved every second of it. 10 out of 10.
    Descendant of the shadows
    -Twisteddarkness
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  • From ANON - hanimeangel on January 02, 2006
    I absolutely love your story.It's the best.Thanks 4 writing it.
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  • From ANON - DF on November 24, 2005
    This is by far the best Spies fic I've read ever. You did an awesome job with this one great work, I hope to read more of your stuff.
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  • From on November 13, 2005
    Kuh-uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuute!

    I loved it.

    So much.
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  • From SicksickMan on September 01, 2004
    Let me just say, this is really so, so good. It's so freaking sweet. It's just the best damn thing I've ever read. It's so nice, I'll even print it. It's gold I tell you. Gold!
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  • From ANON - sicksickman on August 26, 2004
    The best Yuri fic I've ever read
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 12, 2004
    wow! that was amassing you have got to write a sequel to this with Alex in it to
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  • From ANON - LadyCresentStar on February 29, 2004
    how terribly......sweet.....very nice,i like it,i really do,i could almost actualy see it like a movie!!if you add another story,you
    can expect a good reveiw from me!!
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  • From ANON - firelord on February 27, 2004
    wow that was amasing you kept ther persnalitys peficly in takt and still kept to the plot you should write more sories about totally spies you have the skill knowing what they whould do in sertin siawations.
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  • From ANON - SteelAngel2000 on February 24, 2004
    Honestly, when I started reading this, I thought that it was gonna be a straight- PWP fic. Obviously, I was grossly mistaken. It was very well written, with a good understanding of the character's personalities. It had a well developed plot, whis a s a pleasant change for a lemon. And it left the door open for a possible sequel. Brilliant. Brilliant. Ona scale of 1 to 10, I give this fic an 8.5
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