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Reviews for Two Of Us

By : endofoblivion
  • From xXxKikuxXx on March 05, 2010
    This story was so good, I'm not sure what to call it. One of the best written IZ fics I've read for sure, with a well fitting ending. I loved how the characters acted. Gir and Deen were so cute. :]

    kiku
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  • From Genave on July 28, 2008
    Alright. The first thing I want to say is that I've been waiting to make an account until I had a couple stories written to post on this site. However, your story compelled me to do it sooner.

    I almost cried, this story was so good. This is the first fanfic I've ever reviewed. The plot was original, the characters in character when they should be (and out when they shouldn't). Not only your creativeness, but your writing is wonderful as well. Too many times have I read a summary of a plot that is promissing only to begin reading the fic and almost vomit because of the lack of any sort of grammar or effort.

    I absolutely love this story. Obviously one of the best fanfics I've ever read. Please keep up the great work!

    -Genave
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  • From ANON - Fin on November 09, 2006
    hm. it was a beautiful story, full of lovely, thoughtful writing, and deep emotion. still, i don't know if that was the ending i was looking forward to. honestly, for some reason it was a little bit of a let down. you did a good job of expressing Dib's emotions at finally seeing Zim, but i think, with all that he and his family had been through, you could've pushed it a bit more. i think the problem is the ending is a but rushed or short, and a little more closure is needed. still, it doesn't really detract too much from such a moving and lovely story. i'm glad you at least finished it instead of leaving it to die.
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  • From ANON - CtQ on August 12, 2006
    what an amazing story.. i really mean it. not a lot of things get me so worked up emotionally. i even cried in the last couple of chapters. It's so incredibly BELEIVABLE. it's astounding how everyone is so perfectly in-character. not a lot of fanfiction authors can do that with the cast of Invader Zim.

    just.. beautiful. i can't find words that really express my feelings about this story.
    Thank you so much for writing this story and sharing it here with all of us.
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  • From ANON - Herme23 on August 03, 2006
    Oh...my...goodness!!!!! I read this story so long ago, when it ended with just chapter five and I was so sad to find that Zim had died and poor Dib was all by himself!!!! Gods, thank you, thank you, thank you! for posting up the finale!!! I'm so happy now! This was so enjoyable to read, then and now, thanks again. Yours Herme
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  • From ANON - one-eyed jester on November 16, 2005
    That was beautiful. I was so sad though when it happened. It was tragic and realistic. I could imagine all this actually happening. I love it and i think i'm going to go cry now. Thank you for posting this story.
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  • From ANON - Tamago on August 29, 2005
    Thats so saaaaaad! Please don't tell me it's over! *Cries* 10-10 I love tragic stuff...T.T
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  • From ANON - Goat on July 26, 2005
    Oh...oh, wow. That was unbelievably powerful; it left me numb. I am stricken of words.

    Gah... I do hope you find time to complete this. I hate to be left hanging after being so very engrossed...
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  • From ANON - Aveline on June 22, 2005
    This story is so moving. You make every part of it come alive. So sad! But it's very good. Still, I do have one problem: you need to update!!!! Oh please please please! I'm hoping for a happy ending, but I'll take anything at this point. I need more. I'm going to go cry over this story now. Please please please please update!!!!
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  • From Fate on October 22, 2004
    You are evil. Pure utter evil! You had me addicted to that story and then look at what you did! noo! How very mean. very very mean. Good. BUT MEAN
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  • From ANON - Kitten Girl on October 20, 2004
    Oh my God, this story blew me away...I, like everyone else, am now teary-eyed. Please finish this, this is the greatest IZ story I've read. I dare anyone else to try to outdo this story
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  • From ANON - nicknack on August 11, 2004
    oh my gosh! this story is the best ever! and i really mean it! i cant see the key board because i'm crying! and i hardly ever cry! wah! you wrote it so good! how can something so sad be so g!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! wahh! *sob sob* i hope you update very soon! like right now would be good! *sniffle sniffle*! i'm gonna be gone for a couple of weeks and i really want to finish this story before i leave! it's that good! well i love this story and i cant wait for you to update! so UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!
    love, hugs and kisses from your friend,
    nicnack!
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  • From ANON - Spazz on July 18, 2004
    ...saddd ;.;..good, but saddd. :P.
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  • From ANON - hippie on July 09, 2004
    WOW! I usually dont read IZ fics coz i find the pairings squicky and weird but i read the summary for this particular story and became very curious and decided to read it (im curious by nature). and well what can i say but wow that is a beautiful story u have written and made is plausible, it was heartwarming and brilliant...u have changed my view on IZ fic forever thankyou and welldone, keep up the good work, i hope to be reading the rest very soon
    Luv + Peace
    hippie
    ~X~
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  • From ANON - MidnightMoon on March 31, 2004
    Oh my goodness, I felt tears well up in my eyes. This story is so painfully good. You have to continue sooner!
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