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Reviews for Foundations Laid

By : Parareru
  • From ANON - Mr. Secret on October 01, 2006
    This is a perfect storie, especially chapter one! Please letter another so cool storie in adult fanfiction net!
    For example with Kim Monique and Kims Mom!
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  • From ANON - Cold-Chaos on March 25, 2005
    Its good, but a lot of words are verry blotchy and unredable. Just to let you know.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 20, 2005
    it was great reading and i liked the ending...please make can of worms soon ^.^
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  • From ANON - angell1502 on March 28, 2004
    I will never watch Kim Possible again without thinking of Ron and Kim doing it. This was a really good story, but I could have lived without Drakken raping Kim it was very distrubing. I will look for the sequel though.
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  • From ANON - JapaneseJewel on January 25, 2004
    Ah. The Jewel Of Japan has come to AFF.NET, let us rejoice! :P
    Nice fic though, Parareru, yet another reminder why you are one of my personal favorite authors! :D
    It's quite kinky, at some points, and yet kind of sad, confusing depressing again at other points.
    I give it ~****
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  • From ANON - Georsama on January 11, 2004
    I finally figured out how to leave a review! Now then, on with the review. I really enjoyed this chapter, you even had me making wrong guess throthe the whole thing, and Kim kiling Ron, whoa..and Uno's ID is nagging at me...so it 51 and just everything...you did a great job. And a Happy ending thank you for that.
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  • From ANON - cdog21 on January 11, 2004
    Very nice i can't wait for the sequel.
    What is your screen name on FF.net i
    would very much like to know when it is up.
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  • From ANON - cdog21 on January 05, 2004
    Alrighty that was interesting. Uno being from the future and being
    sent to save instead of destroy was something i liked a lot. The
    only thing that threw me off and actually upset me was Goku. Adding
    Dbz to KP was just not meshing. I like the Protector, but having him
    be Goku was just not working. All in all this story is really good
    and even though you included Dbz in the story it's stiood ood and i can't
    wait for the final chapter or the sequel.

    P.S.
    Is any of the truth about the future coming out in the final chapter like
    Shego and Uno, Leviathan, or any of that other stuff.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 04, 2004
    WOW, DBZ CROSSOVER! THIS RULES! bUT THAT WAS EVIL, HURTIN RON LIKE THAT! UPDATE SOON!
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  • From ANON - Rick on January 02, 2004
    X-men tech! Goku! Kami! Who is Uno! Sitch in Time echos? Wow! this is great stuff!
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  • From ANON - Jayman on December 21, 2003
    Yeah I checked FF.Net and your fic was gone. Luckily, I first read this here in AdultFanfiction so I knew you probably updated here. This is the best lemon fic I've read...hands down. No way this is PWP. I look forward to the next chapters of this fic.
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  • From ANON - Classic Cowboy on December 21, 2003
    bout time those two got together. so two chapters andpi lpi left. looking forward to seeing how this all plays out ^^
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  • From ANON - Rick on December 15, 2003
    Reading Chapter 5, you threw me for a loop. Just when I thought this was going to be a psychlogical S & M, you introduce some sort of psychic power!
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  • From ANON - KPFan on December 13, 2003
    I love this story!!!!!!!! It's really sad, but wonderfully written. You almost had my crying at Kim's reaction when she thought she was being raped by someone other than who it was. Please continue SOON!!
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  • From ANON - Classic Cowboy on December 11, 2003
    this is the best adult KP fic on the site right now! keep up the great work, how's Ron and Kim going to get out of this? update faster!
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