Reviews for Trois

BY : lilbutchie2000


  • From ANON - th blob on November 20, 2004

    So....How long are we gonna have to wait?

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  • From on September 25, 2003

    Umm LilButchie2000, the summary doesn't seem to quite match the story - in the summary, you say that Brick is having an affair with Betty, and that he has to choose between her and Blossom; but in the story (which seems to have been severely edited since you posted it on fanfiction.net originally), Brick has already divorced Blossom and remarried to Betty and they're on their honeymoon! :S
    This seems to be, overall, a rather confusingly altered version of chapter 2 (only. And what happened to the other three chapters?) from when you posted it on fanfiction.net. Why'd you re-write it? 'Cos I can't speak for anyone else, but personally, I feel it was better the way it was before.

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  • From ANON - ashe on June 22, 2003

    excellant, just excellant. very well detailed.

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  • From ANON - Horndog on June 18, 2003

    You go Brick! I love to see him fuck another woman other than Blossom! Knowing these two, Brick will fuck Hamster Girl's brains out until the cows come home!

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  • From ANON - Temptress on June 18, 2003

    Brick belongs with Hamster Girl and we all know that although she is not Brick's counterpart, she will treat him a million times better than Blossom would! Hamster Girl might be soft spoken, but man she is great in bed! Brick and Hamster Girl forever!

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