“I am not here to surrender,” Vengelios replied, his black eyes smoldering. “My armies may be defeated, but my people will never accept your father’s rule. They will fight until the last old woman dies with a pitchfork in her hands.”

Oh my god that last line was good

“And did you think you would fare any better against my people if you had been the victor?” Kelsey demanded. “They would fight your armies to the last child with a sharp rock.”

Holy shit the comeback was hot like lava

Well, i really think you should consider it. Out of the existing CotC smutfics (which are like, 5 or 6 total) yours is by far the best one i've come across. I'd really like to see what you could write about other characters like the Sewerqueen, Handlebarb, the witches... Totally up to you tho.

Soooo, are you gonna make more Craig of the Creek stories? 

(Chapter 3) 

The mysterious force behind the sexy slumbering is revealed! …and it seems Craig appreciates a great figure as much as he loves the Creek itself. The theme works perfectly.

Despite her beautifully described womanly form, I love that Tanya had the playful attitude and hedonistic tendencies of most nature spirits. The descriptions of her "mansion" were gorgeous too, and I got the impression of what it was straight away. It was also neat that Tanya had incorporated some of the manmade structures into her design, perhaps since each made at least some effort to blend in with her domain. Her explanation of what she was doing was simple and sweet, easy for the boy to take in, just as her directions to help take him in.

Cute that the trio decided on "rocks" while omitting how they'd gotten said rocks off. Nice to know Craig and Tanya will continue to commune occasionally, though I wonder if JP and Kelsey could handle having more of those dreams themselves. JP would probably go a bit nuts dreaming of the Horse Girls like that then having to interact with them as normal. Meanwhile Kelsey might start to worry that she's some kind of sexual predator. Well, I'm sure Tanya will make sure their "rewards" don't cause any real troubles.

Thanks again.

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First off, I can very much believe that Kelsey is a great bearer of the Full Moon.

Very nice description of the battle's aftermath without having to go into gory detail. Sounds like it was epic. I haven't watched any of the episodes centering on her quests but the Narrator thing was easy to figure out with the way you introduced it. Besides, I loved how it had no qualms about blurting out her private thoughts in front of the captive, and super cool that it came up with the plan for ultimate victory over the New Moon Kingdom. 

The Wikia/fandom page isn't any help figuring out who Prince Vengelios represents from the show, but it seems like she doesn't crush on boys in the show so I'm guessing he's an OC. Hey, it's not like she seems interested in anyone in the show (yet). At least his fiery spirit seems a great match for Kelsey's personality, and being a sexy hunk with a huge cock certainly helps with her schemes… and desires. Beautiful work on the sexy details of how she extracted his full submission (and semen), and it was pretty wise and wonderful of her to let her men celebrate the victory so boisterously too. No pent-up resentment in her ranks!

Forcibly ra… er, "taking" the prince to unite both kingdoms under her father (as much as under her) is hardcore enough, but abruptly leaving him on the ground, naked and humiliated, is a total badassery. Now, whether or not he accepts her ultimatum, Vengelios will always be her bitch. 

(…so he may as well marry her anyway. :D )

Thanks for the riveting and very feisty action.

that was intresting, now creig is next!

Chapter 1

I've only caught bit of the show and like it's style, so at least I knew their personalities going on. Of course my first wonderings are about the cause… but I don't need to dwell on that because it's clearly going to be a fun ride. (…as JP and Maney have already shown. ;) ) The opening imagery in JP's dreams is worth the price of admission on its own, really, and then adding Maney's approach and how deeply it makes him feel is wonderful. Perfectly cute name for the boys' side of their club, by the way. Beautiful action is made even better by continuing to express his feelings a bit more deeply without getting in the way or dragging things out. (I think that's actually a hint you're throwing our way, but I'm sure it'll be clear by the end of chapter 2.)

Now it's time to actually watch a few episodes from the beginning and maybe even get caught up. Thanks for a nice sweetly erotic start to their tales.

thank you! we need more Craig of the Creek stories!

First time I see a craig of the creek smut fic 

Hope you make more in the future especially ones with Kelsey maybe her with a older guy or her dad